Everyone had a laugh about Beckett accusing castle being a cheater and he knows how it hurts when someone cheats, everyone makes a crack in this story, how about of castle for instance says that she is hypocrite bitch who can't solve her dead mother's case and jokes about her capabilities in solving the case, tell me will anyone jokes about that. People have made castle a laughable character on whom they make snarky comments and make a joke of him, and no one sees that what he is able to achieve in his life.

Beckett is a psychotic bitch here, after all this time and time and time again castle proving himself, still he is Playboy in her mind and he is the one who cheated on his ex-wifes and whoring around. That's hurt castle the most when she doesn't know that Meredith cheated on him. For any person when a partner cheats it hurts the most and more if third person accuses the person of cheating without knowing full facts. She always hurts and gets after pass of all the hurtful things she always said to him and remind him the past that he was incapable of keeping a relationship where she is the one who is the hypocrite controlling bitch who thinks she is always right, it makes me hate one of my fav character Beckett the most. And some shit blind fans who makes Beckett a goddess.

You as a writer i so adorably naughty. Loked all the chapters so far.

Amazing. Love hot love. All Caskett. Loved it.

"Castle's visit has all the fixings of a supervised adolescent date." - Lol.
"It's like he and Kate have been caught necking on a first date during the 1950s and Castle is about to face a parental 'you touch my daughter's breasts, you marry her' ultimatum from Dr Parish."- Lol.
"Next time u need to b quiet. Can't wait." - Naughty and aggressive Beckett. Loved it.

Oh! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You are such a tease.

Wow! Nice start. Liked your writing style.

Just (re)rereading this after recommending it to some twitter fanfic cronies.

GUH! This chapter is so good. Sexy, romantic, full of unspoken love and desire. The internal monologues you write are amazing! And the tension! The pre-eye injury chapters in the Old Haunt killed me off, this one's makin' sweet love on my grave!

Kudos! I hope we see you back writing some more...meanwhile I'll keep (re)rereading!

Great story so far! :-)
I especially loved the first line of this chapter:
"There are two kinds of folks who sit around pool tables thinking about how to make a decisive move on Kate Beckett — psychopaths and mystery writers. He's the kind that plays better." - you're a genius!

wow. just wow. I admit, it was sometimes hard to follow the language, it did not always feel natural, but it was definitely fun and action-packed, and hot and romantic at the same time. a little bit too much overwrought for the characters during the fighting, but overall very well written!

DUDE, REALLY, you must continue this! My cheeks hurt so much from smiling and laughing at this fic and I want more!

this story made me laugh probably more than it was supposed to. its really great and funny. i couldnt get over the fact that she got poked in the eye with a cue tip. that just cracked me up. Then all the puns at the eye doctor. This is probably the funniest Castle story i have read, that also fits with the actual characters.

Wow. What a great story! It was funny, sexy, and very sweet. I never thought of Kate as a mayor, but was a fun thought! Thanks for sharing this story with us and I hope you continue to write in the future :)

Lmao! Oh my gosh, those eye puns were great :) Very clever. Too funny about the names of the doctors and how the one was hitting on her too!

Oh my gosh! The "You can drive it anywhere. Even over a cliff, as long as you're naked and straddling my lap when we sail downwards" absolutely cracked me up! This story fun so far, I look forward to reading the rest :)