please update

I liked the chapter!

I hope you come back to your Naruto stories.

Z

I am only on the 9 chapter and I already don't like the fact that whatever that "light" being is/was, is making him shorter and younger. To me, this makes naruto weak and a less capable fighter. His younger and smaller body won't be able to handle the stress of his fighting style and his weapons.

You spelled sharingan wrong

I hope, you continue the story and I really like it.

Hey I am a navy corpsman stationed with the marine and I have to say you really need to go back and look at the actually facts for one it's the united sites marine corps not core 2 soldiers and marines are two entirely different things soldiers are in the army 3 there is no way any spec ops such as the seals would just pass their mission off onto a regular marine thereso this nifty little thing called a security clearance and seals have top secret clearance 4 you don't just drastically jump ranks like that and you don't go from Warrenton officer to a regular one 5 if he had a bachelor's he wouldn't have been enlisted he would have joined as an officer 6 back to the ranks you don't just jump from an E-5 to an E-8 which is what you did when you jump3d him from a sergeant to a first sergeant please go back and check you facts and fix the fubar that is your first few chapters

I loved that u put Miyagi-same love him

I love your stories but the naruto the marine story is sadly removed i was looking for it

continue i love this

Spelling is terrible and I feel like you half assed it

good job on the chapters youve done

Lost intrest when he got smaller.

this is a good fanfic hope you have not abandoned it