it would be awesome if you continued...
as for Ron throwing a curse to the back of Hermione...she's not even there ... her and Harry had left and stayed overnight. so he's talking crazy talk and throwing curses at people at their backs who look like someone he's not been friendly with that's another nail in the weasley coffin...

they aren't Gryffindors

I am really looking forward to the next Chapters, please update

Please update the story soon as possible?

I thought Harry & Hermione were in RAVENCLAW?

just to let you know that the is no bone in the nose it is just cartilage

Your first chapter was good, but the rest are riddled with errors. If you speak another language or you're just young still learning english i recommend having someone proff read your work until you learn the language better. Otherwise I recommend getting a permanent beta reader. Your plot is really interesting and your story telling shows good potential, bit your grammar takes away from your work. Please let me know if you do have the errors fixed.

Your story is very well thought out the only thing that puts me off of it is it's to impersonal the characters feelings are hard to connect to it's there sometimes but to me I would like more feelings on Harry and Hermione relationship some fear excitement there are some laughs and that's good
Any that's my input .

Not young gryffindors, Harry afternoons are ravenclaws.

This is an excellent story. It has gone a little off kilter these last chapters; but funny. It ended here, with no update in 5 years. Would not say a must read, but a good one. The first 20 or so chapters show a more accurate time travel, butterfly effect. The not saying, who else came back, was a little off.

MORE PLEASE!

Interesting story but you need some severe grammatical review. You have some unique ideas and I am enjoying your plot progression, but you have major issues keeping the tense of your writing consistent. You need to pay more attention to your verb tenses; you are mixing past and present tense, often in the same sentence, and this makes your writing very hard to follow. You also need to be more careful with homonyms, especially their/there, which is misused constantly.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

they are abusing that poor werewolf lol

This is a great story I hope you will finish it

Hi I don’t care for the gramatical errors your storynis amazing I hope you continue some day please aim waiting for more chapter what happens next