Loved this ! I hope some day you can get back to It!

If u write more of this i would love to read about them growing up. Keep up amazing work, ur one of my favorite writers

Aww sweet just wish it was longer and did not feel so rushed also in my eyes Harry is a mum he deserves the honor of the term since he carried and gave birth.

Adorable!

Aww...so sweeeeet and cute. Too bad it's so short, I love their twin, if they will grow up, it will be interesting to see their interaction. I hope to see your more story about Drarry in the future ;)

AW! I 3 Teddy!

Sooooo cute! Very ooc but SOOOOO cute!

love it

:p

Interesting. If I could give one critique it would be that if Harry has always been in love with Draco, his reactions make sense. However, Draco's transition from school rival to being in love with Harry was too abrupt. Either build in those feelings more explicitly from the beginning, or take more time for them to develop, or at least a reasonable pretext for a quick transition. I liked "Grandromeda." Bonus points for the clever name.

a crit: I only got a little bit into this story before I stopped reading it. Immediately jumping into love is a bit insulting to the readers. Why would harry immediately tell the person he knows as someone who poisons people and is ultra class sensitive, sneaky, and has gone to the newspapers with info about him before- that he is gay? that would make harry EXTREMELY dumb, to the point of contemptibility.

Furthermore, why would he then decide he wants to marry draco, without so much as talking to him? does he care so much about looks that it doesn't matter the personality behind the person?

._. though your writing itself seems very good. keep it up, but try to remember that "romantic" is not synonymous with "instantaneous". unless it is a creature fic or love at first site fic.

AWWW man that was really sweet! Say is Teddy calling Draco papa or father?

Okay, I really don't want to be unpleasant and stuff, the story is nice but ... maybe TOO nice ? I mean, it's like there is no scenario but an happy even after between draco and Harry. And they keep whispering sweet things, love words et caetera. I don't even have the courage to keep going, because really, it's too pink,too fluffy etc. A bit of romance okay, no problem.. But it's too much for me to handle. Of course, this is my personnal opinion, but still (:

awesome please update

OH MY FREAKING GOD! Are the boys going to be Scorpius and Albus? I love those two.

LOL I love the list of things that Harry likes about his husband.