| Reviews for A Technological Singularity |
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   stylo1 chapter 13 . 5/23 why is element zero so groundbreaking if you can manipulate gravitrons |
| stylo1 chapter 12 . 5/23 take this teleportation device of yours, its basicly an atomic assembler which would revolutionise production. yet you seem to miss this |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 5/23 why would a space elevator be 23.000 miles long... |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 5/23 plasma is not a laser. this is so full of bullshit it honestly looks mpre like a crack fic most of the time. the geek in me really liked your idea but practicly there is so much obvious things you are blatently ignoring i just cant take this seriously |
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 5/23 i dont understand this immortality part, the brain is a computer that is now linked together, if one computer dies there is nothing to connect to thus your mind dies. unless there is a central storage for data that can match a human brain, ppl would still die. |
| stylo1 chapter 3 . 5/23 why hasnt jeff taken the nanites yet? and him working as a public liason officer, he is an arrogant antisocial asshole that is woreshipped by 1000s of ppl all over the goverment |
| stylo1 chapter 3 . 5/23 truly i have to slow down my mind so the ppl in your story can catch up |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 5/23 you really overdid the stupidity of the army, not fully reading reports, scoffing at ideas you dont understand etc etc. at this point it just doesnt make sense |
| Face Yourself chapter 15 . 12/13/2019 I like the story pretty well, and I get that you're taking it slow - it was good to see the development of how they got to this point, even if there was a LOT of wasted space in there too - but at this point it all feels like a waste of time since you're focusing solely on a bunch of characters we don't know or care about, when everyone is just waiting for you to get on with events in space rather than boring old planetside. |
| GDIMartok chapter 22 . 9/3/2019 It's a good story I'm sad to see it died before it could finish. Please bring it back! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/31/2019 Oh right, this is supposed to be a Mass Effect crossover. I forgot that. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 Well this can only go well. |
| TorrentAB chapter 22 . 8/20/2019 You know, I really enjoyed this story, but honestly my biggest regret about it is that I didn’t get to see the councils reaction to the Borg. It’s what I was looking forward to most and it cuts off right before that. The torture! |
| alienyouthct chapter 22 . 4/23/2019 Wish this had been continued at some point. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 2/8/2019 It's such a shame this has been abandoned, it was shaping up to be a fantastic story. :( |
