I tried really hard to finish this, but I couldn't. Your writing was very well done and I was excited for another good Grimmichi au, but then you literally made it one of the most unequal "chases" I've seen in a while. There was no back and forth it was just Grimmjow winning over and over again. Ichigo had no control over his own fucking relationship. Not only was Grimmjow fucking with him, so we're his friends. Rangiku gives Grimmichi his phone number, his own cousin fucking got him drunk so he would sleep with Grimmjow. Then he somehow bows to Nel's whims and now he's on a date with Grimmjow? Fucking bullshit, where is Ichigo's autonomy as a human being where he just says fucking no. Or all the shit between him and Grimmjow? Ichigo should not have literally lost everything over and over again. It wasn't cute and sweet. There was no Ichigo coming to like Grimmjow or some shit, it was the same level of attraction to a hot guy with a shitty personality and he somehow just bowed to everything Grimmjow wanted. Stop writing Ichigo as some limplet. He'd get angry and then literally get nothing out of it or done. Ichigo isn't helpless, he isn't some pathetic loser with no willpower or control over his own life.

Pantera fan detected!

I canny actually believe ya finished this! This was from soooo long ago! Stumbled across it again looking for something to read by pure chance. I'd totally given up on all the old docs I read cause they were from like 2007 n shit. I canny believe ya went back to it 0_0

I'm so fuckin happy ya did though. Like seriously. Hardly anything I've read makes them fight quite like that n that's what I love most about this pairing cause they're so volatile in nature that it should be this explosive.

Goddamnit.

Great stuff.

I'm quite happy after reading all that. Didn't think it was gonna work out but yeah Grimm got it together.

Thank you for that. Seriously 3

Absolutely loved each chapter and wishing it wasn't over! Thanks for such a fun, hot, sexy and well written story! Can't wait to check out other works you might have!

why does everyone pair up shuhei and ichi like urgh

Holy fuckin shit (excuse the language, I got a bit riled up XD) this is perfection.

I like it! :D
Their not that perfect Disney couple.
They're gonna have problems and they know they'll have problems.
I just really like it :)
Good job, friend :3

:D this is great XD

Fantastic thanks for sharing

Gahhhhhh! Too hot! Thank you for writting such an amazing fanfic :3

R u not updating anymore was that the last chapter? I hope not.

Is that it?! It was really good, I enjoyed reading it all the way to the end. Hopefully Ichigo and Grimmjow sort out their problems! Hope you create more great fanfictions like this author-san! ;)

Yes. I loved it.

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I have to say I've been looking for a good Grimm/Ichi story that can keep me reading till the end and still want more and I think i just found it can't wait for you to post an update