Love the premise. Hafta see if anyone continued it.

Has anyone taken up your challenge if so who so I can read it

This story is okay, I guess. It's under 2k words, yet still full of spelling mistakes though, so there's that. Can't even call it a real story either. You just stop it in the middle of everything.

Good story and fovrited

TGM

I real wish you can continue this

This story is good I wish you continued it but I understand why you didn't. I would just like to know who continued the story if anyone

Remake update

Plz tell me who continued this

Awww plz continue!

Thanks for writing :D

love it very interesting idea

Through The Veil - was Great

Intriguing.

GG

* "I am going to send you the past, *

"send you to the past,"

* "And your from the future? And you name isn't really Evan Granger?"*

"you're" not "your"
"your" not "you"

* He had even took out his wand *

"taken" not "took".

* There were no guest, *

"guests" not "guest".

* eliciting several wolf-whistles from the guest,*

"guests" not "guest".

* They only quite kissing when, with a grin on his face, the preacher cleared his throat.*

"quit" not "quite".

* , Evan wondered for the first time weather or not he would be able to follow the instructions fate gave him all those years ago.*

"whether" not "weather"
"Fate" needs a capital letter. Title and name.

* Evan pulled his wand out of it's case*

"its" not "it's"

" Your Harry?"

"You're" not "your".

_

Let's hope that Hermione never had any racy thoughts about Harry, lest she need therapy to deal with her Electra complex

Going to give a whole new meaning to Daddy's girl. And Ron will definitely not be good enough for his little girl. :-p

Although Hermione's status will improve. From Muggleborn to Half-Blood. Possibly Pure-Blood, if her mum is a squib.