o dude i cryed when i read this chapter, it was so emotional

This is so good! I cried multiple times throughout, mainly on the last chapters. I love it

Wow just wow this story is amazing. I loved it so much little Hugo Molly and Lily are too cute. I love lily and Mollies reaction to snape. Hugo Cleaning thethe twins room and sticking everything down was funny yet cute as well as Teddy and Victoriaas date. I really like the fact that Percy was part of this story and he got to apologize twice. Once now and once during the final battle. I like the fact that he got to see Fred again. I love the plot twist of him bumping into future wife at the Cafe. Nice touch. Al being turned into a 14 year old baby was funny especially since he kept trying to get away from Ginny. Please you need to write more your writing is amazing. Love this story and nearly cried at the end it was really beautiful so that you

Actually, redheads don’t grey. We turn white.

Hi, so this is the story I found a while back, I was probably like 12 or something maybe a little older, maybe a little younger. And by a little younger I mean like Hogwarts age. Anyways, now I’m 15, and have found the story again. Usually, well I do love the concept of time trouble, I feel like most plots are definitely very overused. However, I did end up really liking your story and your take on time travel. It had some great moments like when Albus turned into a baby. That probably was one of my favorite parts. Now I’m not sure if you’re still on your account, But if you are, I would so love to read that sequel if you’d still be interested in writing it. It was just such a good story. And I want to see what could come out of it. However I do totally understand if you know you have no ideas or just not really interested in writing a fanfiction like that anymore. But I do still want to let you know that it was a great story, and I definitely enjoyed it. I even ended up reading it again a couple months ago and I usually don’t read things again often unless I really like them.

Man, this chapter was deep.

There’s a lot of women shrieking, being called banshees, being overly emotional and not in control of their emotions. While the men are calm and composed.
It kinda sexist and just lazy writing like

Molly and lilly are so cute . Can't wait for chapter three.

I've only read the first chapter but this story seem really nice

PLEASE UPDATE! ITS AMAZING!

So good! Wonderfully written, I felt like I was there. Suspenseful and ... Magical!
Mischief managed

Wow, can't believe I spent all day reading this! It was insanely captivating, I couldn't stop reading. It was a great time travel fanfic, thank you.

Aww, I loved the de!aging prank idea! Very cute and funny. Although, I kind of wish that teddy had drunk some, so tonks and remus could see him as a kid!

I want resolution to this. I want to know how the altered memories (with the urges to be close to the people that died) affect thing. I want to know how Louis and Roxie's plan to "save" everyone turns out.

And since I'm rubbish at writing these things, GET TO WORK ON IT!

This, I don't get. You use the canon pairing for every couple except Luna's, and then you give Luna's kids their canon names? Lorcan Thomas is alright I guess, but Lysander Thomas is a nightmare. Lysander Scamander works much better. It rhymes! Both have three syllables!

Besides, putting Luna with the naturalist grandson of the man famous for cataloguing magical creatures makes sense because they could go off after snorckacks together.