Reviews for Awakening |
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stankyledeansam chapter 22 . 12/20/2016 Keep going with this |
Thunderpelt06 chapter 17 . 9/27/2016 This bothers me, the Manehattan chapter, Twilight mentioned the wedding, and now they're talking about it being like a few weeks away |
Thunderpelt06 chapter 20 . 9/15/2014 Wow, i can't believe this story has been going for 3 whole years! Great story here! |
oopsimgone chapter 4 . 7/12/2014 *me and my OC Lightning Striker have flashbacks of when we watched Cupcakes HD* Lightning: MAKE IT STOP, SKYLER! MAKE IT STOP! Me: AUGH! DASHIEEEEEEEE |
Lynn364 chapter 18 . 8/17/2013 This chapter omg...I just loved it! I live how two and Dash fight the queen! I loved this story since I first read it a year or so back can't wait for more chaptera |
ImmaRainbowDash chapter 9 . 7/23/2013 Lul. |
ImmaRainbowDash chapter 4 . 7/23/2013 As soon as I saw the word CUPCAKE ( don't ask why I capitalized ) I freaked out. |
PrincessVanelia chapter 17 . 3/15/2013 I started to read "Awakening" in a hospital where I took care to my little son. Your awesome story really helped me forget about it all. I thought "wow, this story is as good as printed books". Addictive plot, innovative concepts, not found in other fics - especially Carver itself - masterly descriptions and of course a bit of psychology makes your work unique. The pace of events is also perfect. In brief, your writing is really, really impressive. I can say whitout exaggeration that "Awakening" is the best MLP fic I've read so far. You are damned talented writer :) To such extent that I don't have any objections to this story, although usually I do, I am quite demanding reader... So I was positively surprised when you published new chapter. Thank you so much for all your great job :) PS. Could you tell me if you are you a man or a woman? I haven't found this information on your profile. I am just curious, I like to imagine the author when I read the book or the story... |
Couldn't delete this profile chapter 13 . 5/29/2012 Yes! The story's being continued after so long. Also, don't know what your intention was, but reading 'dancing' and 'green dog costume' made me think GIR. |
Couldn't delete this profile chapter 12 . 4/6/2012 If you're ever interested in continuing this, I'd be grateful, it's a good story. If not, well, it's an incomplete good story that I've had fun reading. |
Black Sacrement chapter 5 . 3/13/2012 Not bad for a "Cupcakes" derivative |
jman377355 chapter 12 . 3/13/2012 Yeah, you should probably write that down somewhere. |
insightguy chapter 1 . 2/9/2012 re reading it cuz i need to understand it again |
jman377355 chapter 10 . 11/25/2011 Still seems like their would be more emotion from them. Still this story is worth keeping an eye on. |
jman377355 chapter 7 . 11/25/2011 Good chapter, still seems a bit off. I imagine that this bit would be particularly hard to write though. |