Reviews for Awakening
stankyledeansam chapter 22 . 12/20/2016
Keep going with this
Thunderpelt06 chapter 17 . 9/27/2016
This bothers me, the Manehattan chapter, Twilight mentioned the wedding, and now they're talking about it being like a few weeks away
Thunderpelt06 chapter 20 . 9/15/2014
Wow, i can't believe this story has been going for 3 whole years!

Great story here!
oopsimgone chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
*me and my OC Lightning Striker have flashbacks of when we watched Cupcakes HD*
Lightning: MAKE IT STOP, SKYLER! MAKE IT STOP!
Me: AUGH! DASHIEEEEEEEE
Lynn364 chapter 18 . 8/17/2013
This chapter omg...I just loved it! I live how two and Dash fight the queen! I loved this story since I first read it a year or so back can't wait for more chaptera
ImmaRainbowDash chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
Lul.
ImmaRainbowDash chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
As soon as I saw the word CUPCAKE ( don't ask why I capitalized ) I freaked out.
PrincessVanelia chapter 17 . 3/15/2013
I started to read "Awakening" in a hospital where I took care to my little son. Your awesome story really helped me forget about it all. I thought "wow, this story is as good as printed books". Addictive plot, innovative concepts, not found in other fics - especially Carver itself - masterly descriptions and of course a bit of psychology makes your work unique. The pace of events is also perfect.
In brief, your writing is really, really impressive. I can say whitout exaggeration that "Awakening" is the best MLP fic I've read so far. You are damned talented writer :) To such extent that I don't have any objections to this story, although usually I do, I am quite demanding reader...
So I was positively surprised when you published new chapter. Thank you so much for all your great job :)
PS. Could you tell me if you are you a man or a woman? I haven't found this information on your profile. I am just curious, I like to imagine the author when I read the book or the story...
Couldn't delete this profile chapter 13 . 5/29/2012
Yes! The story's being continued after so long. Also, don't know what your intention was, but reading 'dancing' and 'green dog costume' made me think GIR.
Couldn't delete this profile chapter 12 . 4/6/2012
If you're ever interested in continuing this, I'd be grateful, it's a good story. If not, well, it's an incomplete good story that I've had fun reading.
Black Sacrement chapter 5 . 3/13/2012
Not bad for a "Cupcakes" derivative
jman377355 chapter 12 . 3/13/2012
Yeah, you should probably write that down somewhere.
insightguy chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
re reading it cuz i need to understand it again
jman377355 chapter 10 . 11/25/2011
Still seems like their would be more emotion from them. Still this story is worth keeping an eye on.
jman377355 chapter 7 . 11/25/2011
Good chapter, still seems a bit off. I imagine that this bit would be particularly hard to write though.
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