Aww... All the discontinued fics are the best ones..

Why are the good fixs always the discontinued fixs? This is actually amazing, I can't believe there are only eight chapters :'(

Your story is amazing. It has a very interesting story going. I like how you add some of the past every chapter so we are slowly learning what happened in the past and what's happening in the present. I'm wondering what Ash's secret is. Keep up the good work! If you ever decide to pick this back up...whick I really hope you do but if you don't, you did a very good job so far.

Just started playing the game a week ago, got curious if there were any fanfics for this game, and I did not expect to find this gem. I know it's been a while since you updated this story, but I would still like to tell you that I love how much detail you put into building the atmosphere of a scene and the characters emotions, and I hope you'll pick this up again someday.

Cute story! I'm super curious to know what Ash's secret is. I noticed that there haven't been any updates in a while. I definitely understand that life can get in the way of writing, but I hope you will pick this back up one day. It's really good! I love Violet's attempts at cooking. She has real dedication. I also love the way you're introducing the Harvest Goddess. :) Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more.

oh my gosh
i just
wow i started playing this game a few days ago and fell in love and now i fell in love with your story

hopefully university isn't swamping you too bad! thank you for this wow update when you can!

Screw them! I dont care if you update in 5 months, I will wait without complain.

jeez Yoru-chan update faster! I'm so angry that I have to wait! Nah just kidding, take things at your own pace. :D I'm loving your characterizations and little backstories for everyone a lot. I especially like reading about Cam and Ash's friendship, especially now that someone's starting to come between them. What could Ash's secret be olololol ohoho

Your a good writer. You just don't put that much time in it. Try working a little on free weekends and holidays.

Wow, what a twist. Please continue

You haven't reviewed in forevs... I'm dropping the story.

That's IT. Prepare to be hurt. Girl you need to get your ass in gear.
I know you have collage but your last update was 6 months ago. You better believe it.

PLEASE! continue this story i really really love it! please {begging in teary eye}! i already have the game and the male characters that i love the most is ash and cam so please continue this chapter

I honestly can't decide when it comes to Ash and Cam. Poor Cam. : o_o; I hope Ash isn't dead. LOL

ugh just when I've finally set my heart on Ash you go and throw Hiro into the mix with his cute little remark about being intimidate a fly and my heart wavers and now I think even Cam is starting to grow on me... You are good woman... maybe too good... _