Are you naming these chapters after classic rock songs?
I love Welcome to the Jungle and Turn the Page (the Metallica version; the original version is to uninteresting for my hyperactive brain).
I don’t know if that last one’s a song. I mean, if it is, I’ve never heard of it.
This story is great, btw.
—Madison, that 7th grade girl who took the time to write a review you’ll never read. : (

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(Those are smiley faces. Hopefully you’re not dead. And you’ll read them and feel happier. Or maybe they could make you sad because you’re upset you can’t be happy. I don’t know. People are crazy. Don’t commit suicide: it’s cowardly—running away from the world. I had to put that message in there, btw.)
Also, you have fantastic grammar and a wonderful imagination. Nice original plot.

Hi, I just read the fic and love it! Annabeth’s perspective is really well written. Hope someday you’ll continue this fic.
All the best,
Paloma

i love this!
i really like reading Annabeths POV

This is really good! I agree with you on the Beatles being the best band of all time - and George’s songs fit Percabeth weird well.

I really like how you end your stories. It's pretty funny and really cool B)

Will a chapter be added to this with Percy saving Anna Beth from Sirens in Annabeth’s POV? Good writing!

This was so good! LOVE IT!

This was really good! Love it, so good!

'That guy sure knew how to breed'

OMGs AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh Annabeth when will you admit you like him? Hahahahahahaha

Gods of Olympus... This was too good...! I love you!

I love this!

omg the last line killed me D

"Breed..." Oh, my gracious! That line caught me totally off guard. Funny and actually still sounds in character for her, especially at that age. Keep up the good work!

Omg I love this! It's amazing and all these stories about percabeth and poor tortured percy...

HAHAHA That chapter was perfect :):):):)