Very cute and very enjoyable!

Great job.x

Thanks for writing a nice idea as I enjoyed reading this. I liked how you wrote Tobias's thoughts about doing normal things such as Halloween with Rachel.

cute :) nice to see Tobias and Rachel doing some normal things while at the same time hearing Tobias thoughts about it

Super cute and super well-written! You may have just inspired me to try my hand at fanfiction again (it took me many years to ditch the shame too). I'm out of college and I still love Animorphs- I'm THAT cool. Anyway. I loved this. They were in-character and loveable, as usual. Fabulous job.

..an honestly brilliant story. I'm not a fan of romance fics, but this was just incredible. I love how you manage to take the characters and give them a life of their own - enough that they stay in character and enough to make them really interesting.

Love the touches you put in - the whole flirting as humans flirting as birds - and the adjustment issues and all. Very well done piece of work.

hawk

Really cute! )

fluff yayz

I literally tried to add this to my favorites twice. That was sheer perfection for an Animorphs fanfiction.

Awww... Sweet.

This is a great story. Short and very sweet :)