This is amazing, just one word to describe this with one word. Perfectly written.

Powerful!

You're really quite stellar.

Excellent.

This was amazing. Short, but it didn't need length. Thanks for writing it. :)

~Emma

I actually really liked this it was a good take on the episode.

-GBNF

That was beautiful, but so SO sad. I'm glad that Javier was able to save Ryan from himself in the end. Well done.

Ohhhhh... *sniff* absolutely heartbreaking. I love it.

Loved it and love Ryan.

oh my gawd you make me cry...i love this. i love you!

Wow...

Your stories really are incredible, did you know that? Because they are. This was simply marvelous, made my heart physically ache for Ryan. Great job!

And that episode - how incredible was that? I'm actually about to go and rewatch it. :)

Make this a multi-chapter. It'd be good.