| Reviews for Harry Potter, The Jedi That Would Not Die |
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  Jorge chapter 57 . 6/12 First off I want to say thank you for taking the time to write and share this story, I hope all is well with you. I was wondering if you had plans to either complete this story or to continue writing on this site. Thank you again. |
 Kimba292 chapter 26 . 5/3 Ik it’s your story and all, and it’s too late now to change it bur I really don’t like Alema and the fact that she is Harry’s slave. I mean, From what I have read so far, Harry is not as weak as to let Alema be his slave and be ok with it, all of the characters are too accepting of the fact that he has a bloody slave! I’m just ranting but I really don’t like it |
| Fapinator The Great chapter 5 . 4/23 If Voldemort could go into Harry's mind who is an adult, why didn't he do so when Harry was a babe? Would've been much easier as he could control Harry/destroy his mind or something. Wizards have a strong mind in the first place and a powerless ghost was able to get into Harry's mind, seems like a big piece of Turd to me. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/21 I’m sorry, but Yaddle? So funny ( |
| Spectrer chapter 57 . 3/15 I really love this story. I hope that you’ll start writing again. The story is really interesting because there are so many trials for Harry and Hermione and there is so much detail to everything. I really hope you’ll finish it at some point. |
| Lordlexx chapter 44 . 3/12 Wow... let's just kill everyone on the good guys side and some all the bad guys live... |
| Lordlexx chapter 40 . 3/12 Oh look... more failures. Talk about a story of pryffic victories. |
| Lordlexx chapter 39 . 3/12 So Harry gets to be Ginny's whipping boy and he just has to take it? How the fuck is that right in any sort of way? |
| Lordlexx chapter 37 . 3/12 Good gods is everyone in your story incompetent? They are fine with blaming the spiders but not with taking out some dubiously innocent enemies? Every part of your story is about them getting by off the skin of their asses. Have some actual fucking victories and overwhelming wins. Prove they are actually worth reading about. |
| Lordlexx chapter 36 . 3/12 This chapter was painfully stupid. Once again your Harry is being fucking retarded. Once again he has a debilitating injury because of his stupidity. Character development is a thing... |
| Lordlexx chapter 33 . 3/12 Where the fuck is Hedwig? |
| Lordlexx chapter 29 . 3/12 Oh look.. passed out again... |
| Lordlexx chapter 26 . 3/12 I still think you should have used a Marauder class ship if you weren't going to name it such... |
| Lordlexx chapter 19 . 3/12 Is Harry gonna pass out at the end of every mission? |
| Lordlexx chapter 17 . 3/12 There is class of ship called the Marauder in Star Wars... and you choose this one... disappointing. |
