I love this so much

Duuuuuude. That was fantastic. Very realistic to it all as well.

A cool idea well-executed; very nice :) I like this and I love how you wrote Arthur's thoughts, especially how you followed Arthur's train of thought believably back to what other things had happened in that episode. The take on his attitude in general was very well-done and I think that though this is a scene I wouldn't have thought of, now that I've read it, it feels like a necessary part of the episode. Keep up the good work :)
God bless *heart*

true that would make anyone feel horrible but we are only human...

I think this was a really good insight into what Arthur's thoughts would have been. It was good the way you showed Arthur's relief, but also his slight guilt at being relieved that it was Lancelot was dead.

Although Arthur was saddened by Lancelot's sacrifice, he would understand Lance's action. I, on the other hand, was completely shocked by the turn of events. Thanks for writing this bridge. It does seem that the intimate moments we want to see are rarely shown on screen.

Good good good good stuff :)

Wow I really enjoyed this! This is exactly what the show was missing and that I wanted. Thank you for writing this!

you know, i could see this happening. i think that arthur would have felt like that.

well done! well written and in character, love it XD

Great work - I really liked this. It's so true - Arthur would be upset about Lancelot, certainly, but not half as upset as he would have been if it had been Merlin.

I did wish that they'd had some sort of scene like this in the ep, but that's why we all turn to FanFiction, i guess. :P

Bundi

Great story! I enjoyed it!

Wow That was actually great. But I found it a little hard to keep up with though.

It's Kay, Arty! Cant help your thoughts...