Too cute!

It’s so moving

the epilogue made me tear up i was so happy for them! great story im so glad i readit!

Tofutky...i like what u did there good game as well

This was beautifully written. Thank you for the story and for making my heart swell. I related a lot to Ulrich and how you told his backstory. It also reminds me of the first girl I ever had a crush on. Thank you and you're one amazing writer.

I like the fact that Yumi wasn't the bad girl in this fic. Most yaoi ships in general always paint the girl as a b*tch or something. lol You handled that quite well! Great story!

This was an amazing story! I really enjoyed it and I hope to see more like this! I love yaoi and this really went Beyond the Boundary! (Anime Reference! ;) )

Update

Update soon please and if this is the final chapter make a sequel please

This is so beautiful and sad and perfect and I now need to staple my heart back together, thanks for that by the way, and all the feels! All of them! I really like this story so far and would love it if you would update, however since you're in college and it's your first year (trust me, I understand that! College is a hell of a lot different from high school, isn't it?) I get that it might take some time to get to the next chapter. Of course, muse and motivation are also factors that have to be taken into consideration, but just understand that you have at least one person who's interested in seeing this story to the end.

I just feel so sorry for both Ulrich and Odd, but Aelita makes things better and I adored Jeremie's confusion about what Aelita and Ulrich were talking about. It was adorable!

A couple of things, though. You need to be careful about the point of view that's being used because it can get very confusing very quickly. You started out writing in third person and then suddenly switched to first person in the same chapter. It's best if you stick to one point of view per chapter, although sticking to one through out the entire story is for the best, in my opinion. There are some exceptions to that, as there is with everything, however. Proofreading is also for the best. There were a couple of times when a person was talking but there were no quotation marks around what they were saying or there was a random quotation mark that appeared at the end of the sentence, but it wasn't the last thing the person had to say. I can't remember if you did this specifically or if I'm thinking of another story that I read, but either way remember to capitalize Odd's name Some people seem to forget that it seems. Other than that I think it looks good. Very nice!

I do have a quick question though; Odd's art presentation. Is there anything that's going to happen with that, like is it going to be mentioned offhandedly or something? Or is it just going to be forgotten? I'm a little curious is all.

Really looking forward to the next update!

I love this story!
Please update soon!
Thanx!

Such a surprise to see this, had to re read I forgot what it was! Good job hope college gets better.

the story has nice ideas and tackles very real problems. love how you let the characters grow to know they can be the individuals they want to be and not what society forces on them. lets face it people, just cause you're uncomfortable doesnt mean the people who can be happy shouldn't.
one thing i would like though is a split indicator between the two main characters, i couldn't really tell who was being talked about till the middle of the paragraph
and for the college thing, i suggest finding a good friend, not letting work catch up to you, and SLEEP! it may seem impossible and hopeless at the moment but things are fixable. running from a problem never solves it. as long as you're studying what you want, keep to your morals, and see the reason of the struggle it will get better and will be worth it. :3

i loved it please continue it soon

Please update soon and did odd run away