You don't have to be soo negative and that doesn't happen in all fanfics soo shut up. Btw your soo bad at this omg

Your are so bad en look your language

I think I lost a few brain cells in processing the thoughts of authors. But otherwise it was fucking hilarious. Such crazy twisted 189 degree personality turns. Fudging fantastic. Don't forget your socks!

Lmfao

Uggh, tell me about it... I sincerely hate OOC. Like wtf, if you are writing a fanfiction. Keep the characters as they are, if you wanna change personality, give a goddamn reason (albeit i never read victorious ficts before. This is the most relatable thing I've seen all week. My goodness... Will it be bad if i ask you to write a powerpuff girls and a demashitaa version )
~N. Risa

Yes yes yes! At first i loved POV switch, but when i reverted to actual novels, i realized that if you are writing a slice if life story where the characters change scenes frequently you can't shove 144 POV in a freaking chapter. Do like the best of writers and do POV when it is necessary.
Oh and this soo isn't for victorious either. I find it excruciatingly difficult to find good writing anymore. I wish there was a test given before people are allowed to post the shot they do sometimes. I mean if you can even score a 75 in language, please don't post .
I loved this i so agree (though i do have the cliché thoughts to but when i do that, it is implied that it all happens in split second)
~N. Risa

Yeah I am stopping reading this cause u r ruinin the story with ur comments in the story if u took those out it would be so much better

Like halo of this is u dissing ur own work so it doesn't really make sense it would be great if u didn't add those bits

Wait a few minutes and try again. That shits funny

AND YAY CONGRATS ON 400 REVIEWS JACK! :D

Hopefully you'll thank me for this.

So, Nikki to the rescue (as always)!

Your lack of 400 reviews bother me.

lol

i love it funny