You captured this scene of the movie perfectly. It was a very strong moment they showed us and reading your little piece of writing intesifies the emotion and sensation.
Well done!
Sera

Wow.

Awesome. Very powerful, but very succinct. Nicely done. I love how you made the inner workings of his head so much more in-depth and eloquent than anything happening outside of it, which is so in character for him.

You did a great job at capturing the complexity juxtaposed to a sort of childish simplicity in his thoughts. Like he had so much to think of, but was never quite sure to say.

My only comment would be that the mook he decimated had his gun in a shoulder holster, not in the waistband of his pants. Little detail - awesome work.

This was amazingly well-written. You describe his hidden emotions and line-of-thought exactly as expected. Great story - the kiss in this scene is for the record books and I enjoyed how you wrote that part here.

Lovely. You captured his tone, his character, perfectly.

perfect!

Do us all a favor and right some more Driver-based stories. Great movie and an awesome story. Really captured the...creepiness quality that the movie held. Again, good stuff. Not nearly enough good Driver stories out there, but you, sir, have potential.

really well done, i like how you get into the Driver's mind. he doesn't say much but you just know, theres a lot going on underneath.

Just saw the movie, and this piece fits perfectly in it, very well done :)