Only 8 reviews? SMH ... A very nice, nearly noir feeling, piece of writing. Kim lays down the law - the only law that matters to people like Big Daddy.

Half the time I read Big Daddy I hear Sidney Greenstreet in my head instead of Maurice LaMarche.

Just found this one RH, and I liked it. Definitely to the point: "Don't mess with her family".

Bit of the dark side for Kim, but not out of the realm of... (wait for it)... Possibility.

Good to see something new from ya...

Good writing. Smooth. Easy to follow. And straight to the point. I like how Kim was able to threaten BDB without really threatening him. Always a Possible but never a victim.

~Darev

I wonder if Kim ever came back to collect...

CB73

Nice little addendum; great punch line!

Excellent!

It's very significant to be seeing her anger, but even better for the concession she admits to about her hands not being totally clean and the one she doesn't respond to about poor Ron.

I hadn't thought of what she does with Ron in those terms, so that's an interesting 'face yourself' moment Brotherson gave Kim.

I'm not sure about the smoking crater threat, but if I'm not mistaken, I believe you might be referencing this 'I'll call on you for a service, Big Daddy' thing in a future Diplomacy in Action universe chapter. Which means there'll be even more Diplomacy in Action universe story work, whether set at a different time or in the next chapter.

Anyway, while I wasn't sure about the crater threat, the brinksmanship where _Big Daddy_ actually scored a point on _Kim Possible_ was DEFINITELY cool.

Very nicely written tale. My two issues might be that first Kim seems a bit tough, although under the circumstances that is probably justified on her part. Second, I'm not certain how it ties to the Diplomacy in Action storyline...

And speaking of Diplomacy in Action, while it doesn't really count as an issue I had with the story as I read this story I wondered when we'd see another chapter of that. That is a good story and I don't think I'm alone in wanting to see more of it.

Well, well, well it looks like the cheerleader is in the information giving out business too...only she doesn't charge for her services.

I wonder when she's gonna collect.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

Ron Heartbreakerrrr. Hey, dude! Long time no see. Awesome to see a story put out by you, and part of the DiA universe? So awesome. :D Keep up the awesome work.