This is really cool, I think it's really awesome! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're a really good writer... I can envision all the scenes... It's... so... COOL.

awww cute !

You really shouldn't be insecure of your writing. Every one loves positivity, and your really great. Don't hold back from what you really want to write, and don't write to please others. ... Other than that, great story

om-gall, i LOVE this! please update soon!

Poor poor Stan. Always the sad, depressive one of the boys. :( I think this could work better as a friendship fic, but that's just me. I'm really sick of all the slash out there and all the Stan and Kyle fics being romance. I would have loved to see this as the strong bonds of friendship. Anyway, this was really well done and written. Is there another chap? Anyway, really liked it as sad as it was. :)

Awesome story normally I don't do dark but I loved it also huge south park fan feel free to add me or email is love to talk about the show

OMG! IT WAS AWESOME! you HAVE to update soon!