Awwwwwwwww! Creative premise, adorable execution. I loved the ending!

Awwwwwww! Such a great concept and beautifully written! Thank you!

This has that feel good vibe flowing through it at a damning breakneck pace. I can't help but let the grin be plastered across my face. Good times having.

So cute!

LOVE! You need to write more j/a now!

noce story!

This is fantastic!

I had read a couple of your Hunger Games stories, but then I went into your profile and saw this. Community is my favorite show, so I checked it out. I'm glad I did.

Awesome opening line, good characterization. Loved the cell-shaped cake. And the little glimpses of the other timelines, as if all those things were meant to happen anyway, just not at the same time or the same way. Don't know if that makes sense.

And I like that in the two final scenes you changed the outcome. Instead of Shirley getting angry, they laugh and eat the cake. Instead of Annie saying the "dad" line, she stays quiet, and so does Jeff.

Favorite line: "Because Jeff stopped calling her kiddo months ago and he's kissing her back and sometimes growing up means knowing what not to say." It goes to show how much a person's reaction, or what they say or what they don't say, can affect their history.

I really hope you write more Commmunity fics. But if you don't, thank you for this one.

Claudia

Very nice, I enjoyed the originality and all the group members were in charater, wish this were an actual episode

Really enjoyable and kinda enforces my belief that Jeff only said about the bubblegum lipgloss negatively in the show was because Annie said that whole embarrassing dad thing. This was super cute, thank you.

I loved this. Great job threading the timeline bits into it, and I laughed out loud at Pierce and Britta in the bar fight.

Nick

Great story and I loved the concept! Excellent job :)

Brilliant concept! I read the summary and automatically thought of Abed sensing the evil timeline. So this is pretty much canon :)

Wow... This is amazingly good! My favorite post Remedial Chaos Theory story by far! Have you submitted this to milady-milord? You definitely should! I don't recall seeing this on there. But anyways, kudos!

Awesome, and beautifully written. I was toying with something along the lines of the timelines bleeding through, but I'm glad you did it instead, so that I don't have to. Lovely work.

This story was superbly written, and I hope to see more of your writings in the future, good sir.