| Reviews for Here, I Hear |
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  Yoru no Katana chapter 1 . 6/1/2014 Fourth line: It should be "heart" not "hear". |
 SofiaChanson chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 I loved this poem! |
| silpherwoulf chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 This is so...beautiful. I love how you make Senritsu 'hears' more than what she can see. Kurapika does hide a lot of thing behind his smile *sigh*. . Thank you for sharing D . -S- |
| DW-chan chapter 1 . 4/2/2010 I just like to say kudos for being one of the first HxH fanfic writers out there who did a piece on Senritsu and Kurapica, even not as a couple. I'm partial to their pairing so... call me a tad biased. :P Anyway, I just spotted some typographical errors in lines 7 and 8: "Thoughts, feelings, in your hear reside Remords, joy, crashingly collide" You'd want to check your spelling of "heart" and "remorse." :) Also, in the balcony scene, Kurapica had his dark contact lenses on, so the line "your eyes so blue" seems out of place, even if Senritsu knew Kurapica's true eye color when she first encountered him in the train ride. Otherwise, this is a lovely poem with a bit of a sad but wistful ending. :) Nice work! |
| traces and teacups chapter 1 . 9/26/2009 the emotions blend perfectly with the poem... ah, it have been a bit long since I read a great ANGSTY poems like this... keep writting! |
| noiha chapter 1 . 1/27/2009 yaay~~ *add to fave |
| krischie chapter 1 . 10/20/2008 ey, i'm just curious if you are my friend named Michelle magnaye. |
| Feralious chapter 1 . 8/23/2008 Wow, very nice. |
| colouredwing chapter 1 . 8/2/2007 It's great! Since the begining I was really interested in this relationship and this poem catches Senritsu personality amazingly good! She is a very talented observer when it comes to the feelings of people but still she never goes as far as to say that she could determine how someone's heart beats when it's truly itself. I also love this poem because it doesn't seem as forced due to some ridicioulos ryhme pattern, though it does ryhme on many parts which are nice as well. . Anyway I will put this into my favourite list. Thanks for sharing! :D |
| Eige-chan chapter 1 . 8/1/2007 Aww... that was just so cute, and sad, but it was very very good |
| Hana Rui chapter 1 . 4/9/2006 beautiful. Just exactly what senritsu may have been thinking in that particular scene. |
| girlwhosings chapter 1 . 3/13/2004 This poem... is REALLY talking about Kurapica... Real cool, man. |
| Masami chapter 1 . 9/18/2003 Wow... This must be one of the best HxH poems I've read! _ Great stuff! _ |
| sLL chapter 1 . 11/11/2002 Eheheh... nice one... Interesting idea... I never DID think of Senritsu musing about Kurapika . |
| Yami Blue chapter 1 . 6/2/2002 Awwwwwwww! That was so nice! |
