I'm Canadian, familiar with outdoor hockey, but had no idea it could be so hot! Thanks.

I liked it.

I love how everything came together PLZ make more chapters

Oh please make more chapters pleeeaasseee. Im dying to see what happens

Jesus, Sarah, he's your baby brother, smack that little twerp! Toby is such an adolescent ass, but I love Didymus and slinky, sexy Jareth. And damn, him holding her while he makes a new puck was like liquid sex. I'm amazed Sarah didn't collapse right there. This ought to be rated at least T just for the SUGGESTION of all the things Jareth is thinking.

No no noo why don't we get to see Jareth as Sarah's slave?! I was looking forward to that!

...hey! You are missing an important part :P

I love the one-shot! Amazing!

~Xela

I would love to know what happens next. Have you considered writing a second chapter?

Lovely. I'm rooting for Jareth.

Oh gosh I love your stories. Are you going to continue this one? Please do! I always look forward to reading your work...

One of my favourite stories from the Laby Exchange! I love the tension you create between Jareth and Sarah, and especially like how awkward Sarah feels at seeing him again. It's something that doesn't always get enough good attention. The hockey game was exciting to read! And your characterisation of Toby is perfect. Little touches like Sarah's jealousy at how much Toby looks up to Jareth also really add a great dynamic between the three of them. And again, your one-shots always leave me wanting more, more, MORE! Lol. I want to see the scene where Toby told Jareth about his crush (and a scene with Jareth giving him man-to-man advice would be brilliant!). I also want to see Jareth be Sarah's slave for the day (that has some interesting possibilities...). But alas, I know you're busy with a dozen other amazing projects. I shall just sit over here in the corner and cross my fingers! :D

Excellent, as usual. I particularly like rebellious Toby-he hits just the right note.

Most excellent! A unique idea with the hockey theme. And flirty Jareth is... *shudder* brilliant! lol... Seriously though, a great piece of writing!

Nice story. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)