THESE STORIES GIVE ME LIFE! KEEP WRITIN!

What a sad ending :'( why did Kei die? Did he commited suicide?

wahh...this is so sad :'(

Wow. I must say, I am impressed with this tragic story.

Story? Impressive. Very nice. Unique. You have your own story, very far from the anime/manga itself. There are some points which are exceptions. But it was really good.

Characters? Very different but still you used their same physical characteristics as well as their family backgrounds.

Likes? The story. The genre really fits. You can also put hurt in the genre.

Dislikes? There are missing points. Like, I didn't realize that Hikari died, as well Kei. I just became aware when I read it on your author's notes.

Overall, I'm mightily impressed by this fanfic of yours. Good skills! Great job. )

Well, it's kinda cool, ya know? :D

Soo... Kei also died?

How come? I mean, what happened?

Cool story btw.

Update the 'Done' story!

;D

WHAT?

HOW DARE YOU!

YOU KILLED HIKARI! TT

poor Kei... after waiting for so long, this is what he gets?