Reviews for Beauty and the Beast: Brother and Sister |
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![]() ![]() Edit so good bla bla bla EDIT |
![]() ![]() This is a awesome and exciting chapter! Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() This is a awesome story! Keep writing. |
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![]() ![]() This is a awesome chapter! You should update it more often. |
![]() ![]() This is a awesome story! You should update it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the way you interpreted the chapter for this story. A really good introduction and hook to keep your audience interested. However, you repeated a part twice, so you need to fix it somewhere when the old woman gave her a gem and pushed it in her hand. Delete the extra one and that'll be alright |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this story is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has got to be my favorite beauty & the beast fanfic, best story ever! Please update soon:)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so awesome! Please please please write more! |
![]() ![]() This is a fanastatic story! You should update it more often. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I would have jump out of my skin and had a heart attack if that were me there. Elise has her work cut out for her. Nice work on this chapter. :D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool she met Grant. He's a nice guy. This is going to be an interesting visit. Keep up the excellent work on this and I can't wait to read the next chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy, that serves that jerk right. Right into mud with the other pigs and even those look better than him. Keep up the excellent work and I can't wait for the next chapter. :D |