Beautifully written! I was on the edge of my seat during intensity of some chapters and some left me in tears but that’s okay because it was worth reading through from start to finish. (I stayed up all night and half way through to morning to finished this story from the beginning to the end—I do not regret it at all) Thank you for sharing this amazing story! Your writing is amazing!

if Elena wants a human, why didn't she stay with Matt? she doesn't want Damon, she just doesn't want anyone else to have him.

yes!

how can bella call charlie her father when bella is over a 1000 years old? and Charlie is younger then her!

I positively loved this story. You gave a while new spin to things and I am truly thrilled that I came across this story. You have a talent for writing.

Interesting story, but since ch 16 i pushed myself to read it...
Thanks

I’m always slightly nervous while I’m reading a chapter, maybe it’s just because I expect sudden surprises or maybe I’m just waiting for the big bad thing to happen and crush Bella. Either way I’m enjoying this story!

I just wanted to tell you how much I liked your story,”My Guardian Angel “.It was very different
Lots of action ,drama and of course romance .I wonder is there any chance of you writing another Bella and Damon story? Could use another good complete story! Good luck!

Loved the story

can I just say it makes no sense Charlie being angry with Elijah after all Elijah is alot older then Charlie so Elijah was in Bellas life first

ok I know I've reviewed a lot but this needs to be said. Stefan doesn't want elena in the sacrifice cause he doesn't want to lose her but his selfish enough to demand Damon let Bella do it so he loses Bella? some brother Stefan is

I'm not being mean but if Bella was honest with them all to begin with them Damon wouldn't of killed mason and he would trust her more. she's only got herself to blame for masons death

I've said it before and I'll say it again I don't understand why you brought Edward into it. it doesn't make sense. and at this point Bella shouldn't be keeping so many secrets she expects them all to be honest with her but she can't be honest with them

This is pretty bad.

I tried I really really did, but the way Bella just comes charging into the story was just a huge turn off. Not sure how this is is a crossover other than the fact the main character is called Bella, but I'm sure you explain that later on.