Why does every single f*cking Gurren crossover start out with red flags. Whether that be unnecessary 10 tail wolves or the Hokage randomly knowing more than anyone actually wants him to.

Great chapter and plot can't wait to see what happens next

very nice.

of course naruto needs a kamina style katana of FUBAR

they had to do the teeth thing at least once

Oh fuck i haven laughed that hard in a long time. oh man that was awesome.

What the fried fuck kind of formatting and grammar is this?

uh... damn,i'll be blunt about this.

as Amano Yukiteru said, you need to work on you need to make a long chapter about (sp?) between characters seems a bit off,body languange needs to be polished so it feels more... alive? as for character development i'm not really personal opinion about it will be that its progressing too fast,but hey,those are just personal since i haven't write any story lately(meaning 3-4 years) AND my first story is a total wreck ... gah,im ranting again -.-

a piece of advice:action-humor-character development-action-and everything else pops out when you write a chapter(note:not necessarily in that ,i want some twist and turn in a fic,not a predetermined-beforehand-by-readers[1])

just giving my POV about your story,didn't mean to give a flame at all-i need those in my house!-,if anybody offended,im sorry.

1-no,im not giving a name cuz it's gonna be offending to almost ? half the story i read usually has a pool somewhere.i'd be a hyprocrite(how did you spell that again? it seems i alway wrote it wrong) if i hate those kind of stories.

...*ahem*okay, i'll you're not tired from reading this review of mine.

Not bad...

Work on your chapter length and description, make your readers see what you are imagining, you may do well.

Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.

Ah, randomness at its finest. W

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Oh! oh, oooooooh KAMI-SAMA! heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

*snorful*

After the third Gurren Lagann reference I came across in a Time Loop/multi crossover fic, I went looking for this Anime on the net. Found the Dubbed version on Hulu. And can I just say? The CRACK! it keeeeeeeeels me!

Lovely start hon, I particularly liked the Kyuube's reaction.

I hope there is some randomness in the next chapter... '_'

can't wait to find out what will happen enxt and how things are going to turn out for Team Gurren

love it