God, you're good. I've never reviewed anything before in the years I've been reading fanfiction but I can't not. This was one of the most well-written pieces of non-con I've come across, and it being a Portal fic with how hard it is to write for Portal makes it just that much more impressive.

Also, the eponymous songs helped perfectly set the mood for each chapter. :)

Am I a terrible person for loving this? Probably.

This was like a train wreck- what was happening was so terrible and disgusting, but I just couldn't look away. It would have been easier if I did but I just couldn't because the writing was so haunting, and I loved it but I hate it too.
If it was badly written, I could have left but no...

The ending was so spectacular, and so, so sad. The fact that a part of Wheatley hated what was happening to Chell just made the entire thing that much more poignant.

...it's hard to believe you also wrote Sing, Nightingale but it makes sense, that one's well written too. Now excuse me as I go reread it for the fluff I really need right now.

Ah! That was so so good! So sad and so beautifully written. Your phrasing, your word choice, it's just incredible. And it's not just some "dumb fic", it really was incredible. Finishing a project is worth being proud of. Congratulations. You are a fantastic writer. :)

So...I may or may not keep your fics page open on one of my tabs at all times so I can occasionally refresh and see if you've updated anything. I just so happened to refresh an hour ago. Dude. I thought this fic was never going to have closure, and now it does, and I honestly couldn't be happier. This one's been a guilty pleasure of mine for a while now but I never imagined it'd have an ending as amazing as this. Well done.

OKAY
legit truth time
i CRIED
ok? This is so frigging amazing and this fic went entirely different than what i expected
when it popped up in my emails for the last time?
i was just expecting more smut

but i got feelings
i got heart
i cried so much like a little baby and i loved every second of it
just so fricking amazing

i was just not expecting that and i'm so glad it pulled through in the end and im going to go lay down and CRY

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this fic. For starters I'm not a very big fan of non-con, but this is just so delisiously dark. I would actually really like it if you were to finish it at chapter five, not because I dislike your writing or the story (the complete opposite is true). Weatlys reaction of regret closely followed by him pushing that aside as soon as the itch returns shows us that he will probably never stop or tire, ever. Leaving it where you did left me imaging and shuddering if the grim future they have, Wheatly raping Chell as the facility burns around them...

I'm going to go read somthing go fluffy now.

Good God...
You've doomed us all.

that line will haunt me forever now
thanks

...And then the meltdown occured and they all died. D:)

The consience Wheatly is a great touch.

Those geniuses did too well at making a genius and a moron.(I hope he didn't hear that... 8l)

GAH! Need more. XD

Oh my god..that was...HOT.

Phew this is hot. Really well written and I enjoy the slow build of both conflict and heat. Excellent story.