Reviews for As Fate Would Have It
BabyLoveBug95 chapter 26 . 8/22
I love your story. I'm sorry for not reading the updates sooner but life has been crazy. I can't even begin to tell you how much I adore your story.
marianyelilisbeth chapter 26 . 7/1
it was incredible, to feel all the emotions ...
xlove-kawaix chapter 26 . 6/25
Thanks a lot for updating, you really made my day!
Since the quarantine, I'm so bored and always waiting for new updates. I was so happy finding the alert about the update in my inbox.
Thank you again and good luck with your studies. I'm sure you'll be a great vet in the future. Fur balls are waiting for you, keep going.
Awesomenessgurl chapter 26 . 6/24
It's great to have you back! I love to hate this chapter. Your writing is amazing as always i just hate the baby loss. You should write an omake for a bit of sweet to balance the heavy
Guest chapter 26 . 6/24
I really liked this update it was a good read, it hurts to even read about miscarriage ring one who has gone through it but it was tastefully done.
itachisdbzgurl chapter 26 . 6/24
I'm here! I still love your chapters. Sad but expressive and Kagome getting kidnapped as always. Glad you snapped her out of depression so quickly. So many people break her spirit and i just never see that in her canon character even when she was stuck in the future for a few years
MoonGoddess111 chapter 26 . 6/24
ugh. why did you make her lose her baby this is exactly what happened in manga, but it wasn't kagome.
MillieBelle chapter 24 . 5/5
NOOOOO! Poor Kagome, Kail, and their unborn baby...
belladu57 chapter 25 . 2/24
Very good
xlove-kawaix chapter 25 . 1/29
Thanks a lot for updating. I was so happy when I found an update.
First of all, congratulation for getting into you dream school.
Like always, the chapter is amazing.
O feel so sad for Kagome. She just discovered she was pregnant and now she had a miscarriage. What's more, the ship that saved her and Rusafa is heading to Egypt.
And not forgetting Kail losing the battle against Ramses and getting sick, too and losinfmg Kagome above all.
Anyway, I'll wait for the next chapter.
itachisdbzgurl chapter 25 . 1/28
It's great to see you back at it with the suspense, constant drama, and not giving the MCs a break. All I can think of is how B.A it would be if Kags called her Big fluff to melt some asses. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Maybe another question or poll for a omake scene. Would you egbert consider rewriting some scenes in a separate story as what could have been if this happened or the people were in the story? Or like small slice of life things?
yan gomez chapter 25 . 1/28
(google translator) I love your story very much and I and interested in the manga thanks to it, please continue, I love how you placed kagome as a strong woman and determined to fight for her happiness, thank you very much for your story
Guest chapter 5 . 11/12/2019
I really hate crossovers and I only read Sesshomaru (or InuTaisho) with Kagome pairings in PURE IY fandom but this sounded intriguing and I'm glad I gave it a go. This is interesting.

I LOVE that your Kagome's all trained up…and by Sesshomaru woohoo! He's my fave too. I was dreading reading about Tito's death so I really love your twist on that. I'm looking forward to reading Kagome in the Red River world and see what other good twists you'll bring into the story. Despite Yuri's melodrama in the original canon, she's surprisingly a very strong character for a Japanese heroine in mangas (add a whole lot of luck too :D) so I love the idea of replacing her with a well-trained up Kagome cuz not only does she then bring in combat skills but also her reiki AND Shikon's power. BTW I love that Sango likely trained her the basics daily in addition to get what is likely advanced training from Sessh, making it all pretty believable.

A couple of things I didn't like were (1) Ankoku. I don't mind Kagome even gaining youkai's traits/power from the youkai housed in Shikon but sorry I hated Ankoku cuz feels like an evil OC – a completely different person – just came and took over our heroine Kagome… I'm really hoping I won't see much of her, if any, but *sigh* I'm guessing it's wishful thinking on my part (2) I hate how you're replacing perfectly good English with Japanese. I totally think Japanese words should be used where there is no good English equivalent (eg youkai/youki) but really hate perfectly fine English just randomly being substituted for Japanese like for "Gomen ne?" "Daijoubu desuka?" Even if the Japanese is grammatically correct, there are personal/relative/situational nuances that are so subtle and complex that your Japanese just doesn't fit. Eg. Kagome isn't the type to use keigo (polite speech) on friends let alone on a servant boy she thinks of as similar to little Shippo! Or Ankoku who you introduce as a kinda evil/self-centered/aggressive being using keigo polite speech says "iie" to her other inner half Kagome (so polite)! And even if you get the Japanese totally right, the "feel/mood" of the two languages is so different that it's very jarring reading Japanese words/phrases randomly stuck in an English story cuz it really pulls me out of your story world. (BTW I only read/watch anime and manga in Japanese so I've got nothing against the language, it's just randomly substituting perfectly fine English with Japanese words/phrases that's really annoying cuz it's either wrong – grammatically or for the character/situation – or it even if it's right, the language switches very jarringly into a very different feel).

Also, I found Kazuhiko bit confusing/meh. I don't get what Kazuhiko/Akihiko are – other than being Fate's lover, well Kazuhiko seems like her sadistic/aggressive lover and Akihiko seems like her bodyguard/servant? Even though they're split personalities in one body? But what are they that they can override Fate's direct order and Kazuhiko keep testing Kagome despite Fate ordering him to stop? I thought Akihiko was just Fate's servant and protector but Kazuhiko got me pretty confused when he suddenly showed up to be her lover AND able to overrule Fate cuz I doubt many beings, unless they're major kami, can overrule Fate… And really confusing what Kazuhiko was trying to do – in the beginning it seemed like he was just gonna give Kags a tough test but later just seemed like he wanted her to fail and die… So yeah, while I didn't mind that Fate and her lover were dabbling in Kagome's life (tho I was hoping for Kag's good mostly) Kazuhiko just kinda ruined that for me. But I'm only on Ch5 so will see how this develops.

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story but just wanted to drop a note to say thanks for sharing a lovely story with us and share my thoughts so far.
HadrianSlytherinPeverell chapter 24 . 8/30/2019
Ankoku is an annoying homewrecker in my opinion
kakashixangela chapter 24 . 7/24/2019
NOOOO NOT THE BABY! TTTT huhuhuhuhu pls noooooo. our girl's been through a lot and having this happen to her would definitely break her :c there has to be another way right? :c right? huhuhu so saaaaaad
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