Reviews for The Fall of the house of Potter |
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TorstenL chapter 1 . 6/17 Good story! |
lord of the east chapter 1 . 6/6 Unexpectedly fun story |
gabzep chapter 1 . 6/6 The Potter’s followed Dumbledore just like the Death Eaters followed Voldemort. Not only did they abandoned their son but put their friend in jail. |
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 6/5 This was a pretty amazing story. I loved nearly the entirety of it. Although, Daphne threatening the Potters with death after Harry just got done expressly denying consent for their deaths to be staged kinda irked me a bit. That is but a small issue that did not detract at all from my enjoyment. |
huntjd1 chapter 1 . 5/1 I got about a quarter through the story before I decided the plot line was just not for me. I just don't care to read about a story about parents willing to sacrifice their child into a life of torture for some nebulas greater good. Thanks for sharing the story anyways though I have really enjoyed some of your other stories. |
Vanadir chapter 1 . 1/21 Thank you for a great story |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 1/18 Three major problems with this. First; there’s no logical reason for James and Lily to have faked their deaththe reason given is a lame excuse at best. Second; Voldemort’s explanation about the previous murders made no senseit showed Cedric as well (which was already nonsensical in canon since Peter killed him; not Voldemort). Third; you completely ignore the fact that Harry hears his mother die when around dementors. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15 Brilliant one-shot, love the chemistry between Harry and Daphne. My only complaint is how Hermione got the sh*t ending where she was given hope for nothing. While Ron was the evil b*stard yet got the good(ish) ending. |
kyoshi711 chapter 1 . 12/10/2019 Thoroughly enjoyed this story. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 I never like those where a parent has abandoned his/her child and then just lives with little remorse! It just hurts me way too much to even think about it. |
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 Excellent way to punch the Harry/Daphne ticket. |
Rykell111 chapter 1 . 5/25/2019 One of the best fanfiction I’ve ever read! |
Reader chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 Great story, but I would have preferred it to be split up into a couple of chapters. |
dylansandy1993 chapter 1 . 5/7/2019 what an awesome story! While I personally find the HP fanfics from this author to be good and bad, I enjoyed this one immesureably. It was concise, sweet, endearing, realistic and remained true to the fact that the source material was ninety percent "slice of life". My opinion is that I didn't enjoy reading the X-Men crossover and have yet to finish that story. My complaints are not due to the integration between fiction. They are due to the dependency Harry demonstrated throughout. I did feel that the emotional rollercoaster he went through was more realistic than the canon response.. I would reccomended reading every Harry Potter fanfiction on this authors profile as the three I have read so far are quite enjoyable. Even the one I disliked, it was mostly due to my preferences and perspective on what I felt was a disconnect from normal behavior I will also readily admit that the multiverse Luna/Harry is my favorite so far. It's so sweet and endearing. I wish that that relationship was explored more often. Luna is rarely such a realistic and empathetic character in fanfiction as normally she is depicted as a dreamy seer. |
HpDgdark chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 This is one of my favorite did of all time that I finally managed to track back down |