First off, you don't need to include character descriptions for the Kuro characters. When fans browse the Kuro fandom, it's assumed that they are already familiar with the show and its characters, so recapping what they look and act like is a waste of space and will be skipped over by the readers.

Secondly, try to remember what time period Kuro is set in. Girls in the Victorian era were definitely NOT remembered for having bright pink hair and abnormally pink eyes, unless she's a character of the supernatural sort or something, which would defeat the purpose of her running from those "ruffians" and subsequently getting beaned in the head by an orange. Though there might be a plausible reason for all of this...in which case I'll just have to keep reading.

Kudos for trying not to make the character too Mary Sue-ish, though, especially considering the Sue-packed fandom you're in!

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This is great so far! Yay no-Mary-Sueish business! I swear though. Some people. *shakes head*

I'm caught between two opinions on your speed though. On one hand, I like the general pace that you take, but I also think that you're squeezing so much into these 6 chapters. It would be nice if you slowed down a little bit but I'm just a reviewer so you don't have to take my advice.

I'm glad you take the time to describe the scenery, too. The description of the two dresses was wonderful but I do agree with another reviewer somewhere below me who talked about describing your characters. It would be nice if you threw some descriptions of them when you're describing what they're doing or something of that nature.

Overall, great job! Can't wait to read more! :)

so far, so good

she's pretty interesting _

this is very interesting and makes me curious, continue soon plz!

I love this story! Update Soon! I can't wait!

Love the storyline!

Did you changed the title...? Well anyway... I like the story... :)

Ah, I do like the story at the moment! Your OC seems not to be indulging in mary-sueish behavoir so far, which is always a good thing!

I have a word of advice though; It seems you describe your characters a lot so instead of stopping each time you introduce a new character to describe them, you could include little tidbits of their appearance throughout the story? But please, I am merely a reviewer, only take my advice if you want to~

I am reeeeally looking forward to the next chapter! But BAD SEBBY! You can't seduce people everytime you want something ;)

Please continue!

It seems like an interesting story so far. Hope you continue writing