ironic Edward actually was a suucide. While poor Bella wasn't. Here was can see the loopholes(?) in the legal system (and whatever systems). Sad

What an original concept this story was. Thanks for sharing

It was extraordinary. I don't know if it was your goal, but the story was very funny. In fact, it had everything: comedy, horror, romance, sarcasm, feminism, spirituality... hard to mention everything. Very very creative, on top of that. I wonder what happens in this mind of yours. Thanks for the fic. Have a nice day!

Great story, very original. Thank you.

I love this little story, but I have questions. Why did Edward get the nice house? why was Bella's death classed as suicide?

This was a nice story, I really liked it!

Nice idea. Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

loved it the first time, and loved it this time :)

I really enjoyed your story, what a different point of view of eternity. Hope you do continue this story! Great job!

I'm so glad I gave this a shot. I thought I'd read most of the non-AH Twilight fix out there, so I'm thrilled that you reposted since I might not have gone back so far to search. This is such an interesting twist to the Bella-really-died-cliff-diving trope. I absolutely love what you did here.

So original!

I wish you could make it longer. Love it!

Great one shot. Hope you write more fics

I like the new version

Omg, I loved this! It would be so awesome if you eventually did a bunch of Outtakes.