Reviews for Under the Waves |
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![]() ![]() Amazing! And I don't know what else to say, I'm so happy for Jasper and Edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. Thank you for the entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! I can't BELIEVE you killed ALICE I mean, harsh! But. other than that? Awesome story. |
![]() ![]() Sigh...I loved your story. You wrote their pain so well, and their longing, too. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful story! You're an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember reading this from the start, it was so beautiful! Write more stories like this! You got me through so many boring days at school, even the hard times. When you updated I was immensely overjoyed, you are a amazing writer, you inspire me. That last line, "and then Edward pulls him closer, and jasper feels like the last pieces of him that were frozen melt, too." It was so beautiful for a while I wrote it down just to remind me of this story. I got the guts to write because of you, I wanted to be like you. I don't comment on stories but this was truly amazing. Thank you. Edward and Jasper forever3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a beautifully written story. So very sad, but yet, beautiful. This is probably one of my favorite Jaspers, ever. I didn't think I would like it... but your writing kept bringing me back. If English isn't your 1st language, then either you've been blessed with excellent betas or your understanding of human & vampire emotions is exquisite! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaah, so freaking beautiful! I absolutely loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so great, I can't... I don't even know what's the right word to use. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW,This was amazing! |
![]() ![]() So beautiful. Loved this story, thanks so much. Hugs, Lil |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. Intriguing. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful fic. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us. Loved this Jasper and what you did with his character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Waves' Hi and Goodbye. When I first read the title of this story and that it wa pairing...I was thinking of Jasper's golden 'wavy' hair. I mean that I could picture Edward 'Under the Waves' of Jasper's golden curls. I enjoyed their journey. Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling and using our beloved Twi-Characters. Take Care and Happy Writing Rita ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This was so beautifully written. There was a lot of depth to Jasper and Edward. The despair that Jasper feels, fuck, I feel for the guy. Your writing made it so easy to get lost in the story and empathize with them. I loved reading this. I loved Jasper's journey of self exploration. You are an amazing writer! |