Reviews for Raven Squadron
Mallahawk25 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019
I would say millions at least for the service members due to the size of humanity
Mallahawk25 chapter 25 . 1/27/2017
I loved the story. I'm pretty sure you meant precursors when talking about prmethein. If so any of there technology would be none existent because when the halos fired it wiped out all of their technology because of what thier technology was based on. That's the only thing I can really nit pick about it.
Nemoskull chapter 15 . 8/19/2016
congraduations, you just turned a badass woman in to a middle school girl. bravo.
i really never understand why people keep writing strong women who turn to shit and forget everything they stand for once a hot guy shows up.
Guest chapter 25 . 5/7/2015
This fanfic needs to continue
AngelOfTheMad chapter 24 . 3/29/2015
Excellent story, just so you know, 21 gun salute is with cannons, the thing they do at funerals is called a three volly salute.
trninjakiller chapter 15 . 2/24/2015
You start this fucking love triangle and I am done.
trninjakiller chapter 10 . 2/24/2015
I know what story this ties into I just can't remember the name. About chief retiring and living in LA with some woman. When a cove ship crash lands.
Rej chapter 25 . 10/17/2014
: WE NEED MOAR PLEEEESE! -cries in frustration-
AngelOfTheMad chapter 8 . 10/24/2012
just for the record, the AFA is actually a part of Colorado Springs. I would know, I live here in the Springs!
strikeIWSP chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
This story is quite posibly my favorite story to EVER have the pleaseure of reading on this or any other site. I am sorry I have to true comments of value as I could not stop myself from ignoring everythign around myself and engrosing myself in the plot.
Xulandr chapter 8 . 8/29/2012
So far, this story deserves to be a book. It is one of the best fanfiction stories out there, if not the best. There is so much detail and emotion you convey. Awesome job.
A-Sly-Fox chapter 25 . 4/23/2012
Great story!
Lieutenant Paladine chapter 25 . 4/11/2012
I love your writing style, its wonderful. You are an incredible inspiration, sir. Keep up the good work.
Species Unknown chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I read the first chapter. VERY good. The one thing will have trouble writing are poem and halo five. I cant get the action right without making a mary-sue
deathhides chapter 25 . 1/26/2012
really really good
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