Just saying, instead of going into extreme detail about Carter's breasts, you could have just said "exposing herself."

This is a good story. I'm sad to hear that the author passed away.

my condolences

im sorry for your loss

This is very sad news, and I feel for the family and will keep the family in my thoughts and prayers. I have to say this, This story is a fantastic blend of the two worlds that I haven't seen done on this lvl and will saddly miss.

fucking shit don't read

as much as I like naruto I can't stand this ameriwank stargate shit. it's the main reason I couldn't not watch the show. So I am done.

I forget what chapter you put this in but you put in a misnomer. Naruto's birthday is actually today the 10th of October not December the 10th. Thought for a moment there that you were reference hinata's birthday but that's December the 27th. Just thought you'd like to know .I believe it was chapter 7

My condolences to Mike's family and to you as well. I know what it feels like to loose someone you love and care for dearly and it's not easy to deal with let alone move on. Mikes stories are some of the best I've read on Fanfiction making me laugh, cry, think and just immerse myself into the worlds he fashioned, or refashioned if you want to be technical.

It's sad such a brilliant mind has been lost so soon and I can say that I will miss reading the words he typed for all us readers. I've read most of his stories but as a memento to Mike I'm going to favorite all his works so anyone who visits my page can find them there and, hopefully, enjoy them as much as I did.

Please give his family my condolences and sadness for their loss and tell them from someone who's had the same hole ripped in their heart that, while it ll still hurt, it does heal.

more please keep typing and please reply

Thank you for the update.

My prayers are with you and his family. Having worked in health care for 11 years I know how easy it is for something like this to happen.

A great writer has pass away long live Mike

My condolences for whatever they are worth.
The light fades on another world with only my imagination to fill it, but would it have been what was originally to be?

I've seen quite a few authors die. On the one hand its a form of closure for the story, on the other hand, the chance of it getting finished however remote falls to 0.

Thanks for letting us know, once again, sorry for your loss, we are all lesser for their passing.

I am sorry he is gone for me to want to read his work is definitely worthwhile to read. I think I can do Ninjagate justice as I do know some of the more military aspects. (Family all military) And I am a fan of stargate, So I may do that.

But for his family my prayers are with them.