So... I was just rereading this beautiful fic and my eyes popped out of my head. Noh? NOH? As in DOCTOR Noh?

/mindblown

You are brilliant. That is all.

STOP WRITING SUCH BEAUTIFUL STUFF! I will be here all night! My favorites list will swell like a balloon!

But in all seriousness, this is amazing. I'm not sure I understood all of it- was it just me, or did ... did Noh seem more like the child of the Doctor and the TARDIS than the Doctor and River? I'm not sure. But it was wonderful. I loved the suddenness of it all. The voice. All of it. Beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

This confused me, but I'm not entirely sure that that's a bad thing. I want to know so badly what the explanation behind all this is...and yet I have a feeling that knowing would actually make it less fascinating, not more. How odd.

Your 11's voice is spot on, and Noh does a good job of being clever and spunky and so forth without being obnoxious or cliche.

hmmm "Pond ginger" with curly hair that nobody else has, and remembers her first two years before her mum and dad? hmm yes i think river's got a LOT of explainin to do. please continue this!

I've never added so many stories about River (well, sort of) in one day. Possibly ever. I think you've bewitched me.

Oh, what an incredible and sweet story! I really hope you continue the story and don't leave it as a one shot. You have a very unique writing voice. I look forward to reading more of you!

I think she has some explaining to do too! This was really lovely. I liked Noh's character! Like a mini Doctor and very matter-of-fact how she told the Doctor that she was running away. Very cute story :)

Ah. That was well written. :D

Okay, assuming you are implying what I think you're implying, that is very true. And i'm guessing, since the Doctor has brown hair and River has blonde hair, that she inherited her hair color from her grandmama? She sounds French to me. The name, Maman, Papa. Was that your intention?

Oh dear. Please tell me that this is not a one-shot. This is so much more than a one-shot