I love the way you built the intensity here and how they came to open to each other. I daresay the fact that they are getting so intimate annoys the stuffing out of some (Ginny, Molly, I'm looking at you) but it seems so right and so powerful at the end.

I'm still wondering what business it is of Molly Fucking Weasley's what books Hermione orders. Still waiting for that to be clarified... ... ...

Oh how I love a powerful Hermione and Harry, ready to make waves. Their connection was sweet, so sweet. This was a great read :)

Such a great read. A little flirty throughout, very sexy, and just so Harmony. I really wasn't sure what I had expected from the summary, I picked it today as short enough to consume during my lunch break at work, and find pure gold. Pun unintended. Very nice piece of writing.

Great story!

omg
i love it

I'm not sure I completely understood but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless. Great story!

Love this!

Where is the rest? Where they actually change the world? Where they make love?

I'm so glad I found this!

I love them. I hope you one day randomly decide to make this longer!

Interesting, mysterious, and very sensual. Nice work.

ohgod ohgod I think I died a little! What a build-up *slow clap* and the climax (of the story :D) Gawd I never knew I needed Harmony in life!

I'm not a Harmony fan.
But this story is a brilliant exception! Love cool!Ron

This was very sexy, very interesting and very Fun! Loved it, thank you for sharing!