this is sick, absolutely disgusting. not only are you freely writing about incest, you’re publishing child porn, without any warnings. i thought this was gonna be a story about puberty, but you made it into the rape of a 12 year old. do you have no remorse?

SWEET HOME ALABAMAA!
how did you manage to put incest,pedo,rape,toxic,sweet in the same sentence I dont even know.
My wig got snatched sis, This is only for people with dark sense of humour

I started when I was 13 but my mom said started around 20.

How old were they? I know Alice's 12 but not her brothers.

Haha! Alice hasn't started that early! Its in the normal range. I myself, started when I was ten. *shivers* it was awful...

I know this fic is under 'Humor', but chapter 4 was really fucked up. Alice, a twelve-year-old, basically got molested by her own BROTHER, who helped bring her up, which is not only gross, (since she was also ON HER PERIOD) but makes no sense. If Scotland helped raise her, then the Westermarck effect would be in practise, and I find it hard to believe he'd do that to someone. I know it's Rated M, but that was really...unpleasant.

XD
Laughing internally at the UK Family...

You really need to put a trigger warning on this.
To be honest, I think it's a bit out of character for someone like Scotland, who RAISED her, to want to do his own sister. Especially when she told him to stop.

Also I highly doubt Alice, who saw it as rape (most probably), would want to have sex with him again.
Please put this on where it belongs and please put the proper trigger warnings on it.
kthnx.

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So perverted. No comment.

But I say this, your writing style is good.

Why does everyone's happen when they like awake? I woke up in the morning to find out that i was bleeding in the night.

I have a /whoooole/ new perspective on ScotUK now... 0_0 Your writing was very good, excepted you could probably fix "imaginated" to "imagined".

D: It's over for good!

FFFFFFF This was so good...

Poor Alice though. Getting fucked on your period has got to get messy.

Write more smut? -puppy eyes- pretty please 3 3

Great story! But I have to wonder, are you sure that you're a virgin? ;D

Awww Scotland is so cute and loving in this chapter! Much props to you! Great chapter, and yeah the Church of England was really intense and weird for a long time, so Alice getting all mixed up makes sense to me. Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Pen

its so digustingly funny please make the next chapter more perverted

oh men!