This is so amazing oh my god I love it

Oh my gosh. The story, your fucking analysis of TobyJenna is Iever would have thought. And, honestly, the writing-the damned simplicity of it- is perfect. It fits the tale beautifully.

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ohhhh! this is good please write more. please please please.

You got inside his head really well!

I love how you've portrayed Jenna. Thats exactly how I've always pictured it. AMAZING Job. Keep it up!

This fanfiction is fantastic, you deal with the subject matter well, and I really like your writing style. I love that you don't shy away from how messed up the relationship is/was and I think that you managed to portray the complexities in the personalities of both characters.

I especially enjoyed this description: 'Even now, as she carefully lowered herself onto the step beside him, he could feel that dusty echo of fear, like a hangover, the dead-rat taste of shame at the base of his tongue.'

Overall, I just really love this fanfic!

Oooh, wow. Awesome ... and kinda creepy. Really love it.

- Panda