I loved this! Very well written, and I think you captured the characters spot on. Well done!

Amazing!(:

Awesome! I love how Finch underestimated Reese. :)

Excellent and very touching story!
I felt sorry for Finch at the end of this episode.

I really enjoyed this story arc and kind of hope that you will develop it further. Definitely kept me reading all the way through - nice job!

So good. Glad to learn little more about the "infamous" machine that always seems in the background of all stories. Looks like the start of a very great relationship. Maybe the story will continue or have a sequel.

wonderful. Write more.

Beautifully written! Excellent premise! And you've captured the voices - and internal thoughts - of both characters PERFECTLY! Why are there not more reviews? Maybe you should re-post the second half as a separate chapter so this story gets more attention, or even split it up into 4 chapters... It certainly deserves it!

One small note: "I want you to make my men and I invisible" - "I want you to make ME invisible". Just a word to the wise...

I want to read more of your PoI stories! Please keep it up!

Puuurrrrrrrr. Thank you, WW.

Beautifully written. I loved everything about it especially how Finch's number came up. I've often thought of what would happen if that was the case. Great job at keeping them in character, great job over all. Instant fave :)

I like this "clichefic" of yours alot.

Could totally hear Finch's voice when it came to "his side" of the story.

I can't say that they are an "OTP" yet for me, but I like them together :D