Fantastic, I can't wait to see what happens writing.

Wow, just wow. You're vocabulary and grammar is phenomenal. You are a really good and descriptive writer.

Dr. Briefs: Where did you get that muffin?
Goku: Muffin button.
Briefs: I never installed a muffin button!
Goku: Then where did I get this muffin?

You're certainly expanding the characters, I just worry about things being too busy, unless of course, all of the small details will add up later on ;)

*nudge*nudge*wink*wink*

My feels... ughhhhhh, more plz its really good and i want to get to the good part :D

This is a pretty enjoyable story and I hope to see more soon.

Pleaaaasssssseeee Updddaaatttteeeee! Love the story and the procedure sounded so real i'm planning on becoming a surgeon and I want to be able to change someones life like that.

Wow! I'm so sorry it took me so long to read and review, but holy crap did you deliver in this chapter!

I NEED chapter three ASAP _

I really loved this, you did a great job :D

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

-Mari~*

Well written, and well done :)

I love Yui and Hinata's quirky relationship, and I'd be a liar if I said their "romance" didn't bring me to tears.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this piece. Keep it up :)