This is amazing I’ve never been more sad for a story to end

Fuck. Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck! You're portrayal of Charlie was magnificent. His speech in the early chapters fucking Broke me on public transport. How you have brought a new life to these old characters is something beautiful. Emmets PoV was unbearably sweet, Angela being so understanding, Esme/Carlisle's whole synchronicity from their PoV. Rose being both self-absorbed and fiercely loyal. All of it was so well written and to be left unfinished. It's unfair of me to ask you to continue if you are no longer interested but I selfishly hope you will.

I understand it's been over a year, and I don't know if you'll ever read this but you are immensely talented and I'd happily read anything you published 3

Would love to see more of this story, hopefully you'll come back soon.

I am of the confusion

Definitely not alone!

Welcome back.

I hadn't read this before but I'm very interested to see what you do with it now!

Poor Bella, taking things in stride isn't her strong thing. What the hell it's Alice doing, run Alice don't let that crazy witch get you!

I have now read this chapter several times.
I would like to make just one recommendation, add a couple extra spaces between POV changes.

Now, on to the story.
The moment the doll was lifted up and the pin was removed, I knew what, how, and why.

Alice would definitely do something like that in order to maintain balance and peace within her family. At least until it became impossible to avoid.

I believe that may have just happened.

Bella...
She's going to have to challenge her belief. Test her certainty that Angela has to be wrong.

I'm looking forward to the full realization.

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

i am going to follow this to see if you keep updating, because i hate it when i am reading a story and then the author decides to drop it.

Excited for the next update!

whooh... accidental and total shocked overload to Bella here. Damn intense drama. Ty for the update

I have been patiently waiting for this. I will continue to wait because I understand why it's so important to get it the way you need it. You can do this. I've always known that, and so...I wait.

Whenever the power of motivation comes, use it to get the words down. It is worth it, I promise you that. You can always go back and "fix" things afterward.

Those things said, I'm ready to know what Alice is up to and I want to see how Bella unfolds into who she should have been in the books.

All of this still matters. There were too many young minds affected by Bella's continual complacency to please others not to give a better story here.

Whoa, she’s really panicking from what Angela revealed. Kind of dramatic though.