nice.

Please continue! Please create some type of sequel for this! How this scene changes all of the events in TFP.

MOAR! Please?

This was an excellent story. The dialogue was perfectly in characters, and I felt that Airachnid and Megatron were very much in character. I remember that I was somewhat disappointed with how they used the Orion Pax subplot, and I like to think that something like this fic happened during it.

Thank you for writing this story.

Curse it, why is this complete? I want more! This was SO well done, and the dialogue was perfect! I hope the season premiere is this good! -

This is freakin amazing :)

I really like this. Is it a oneshot? Or more because if there's more would we see a more aggressive side of Optimus?

I really like this. Is it a oneshot? Or more because if there's more would we see a more aggressive side of Optimus?

Wooow! That was good! Poor Pax and dang Megatron's amazing ability to lie so well... Even though it kinda was and wasn't a lie... well.. in the context it was made in, it was a lie... Your story was awesome, I wish there was more! :D

Oh WOW! A nice tight story with terrible repercussions for the future. I am wondering what Orion Pax will feel if and when he finds out the truth and what will Optimus Prime feel when it is all over.

This is fantastic!

Powerful interaction here. I am very glad for this portrayal of Orion as wise enough to know he is being deceived and not given the entire story, and demanding the truth.

And, from his point of view, Megatron's words are indeed the truth, and yet also completely deceptive. Though I feel that Megatron, if he really understands Orion, knows exactly why they ended up on opposite sides. But that is another story.

Kudos to you on this. Great job.

Hi, my friend! It's been a while that I read a story of yours w. This one, again, you suprise me. It looks like Airachnid was trying to made Optimus/ Orion to fall in question about Megatron and in some way seduce him O-Olll. I wish in the second season, she have interaction with him in some way like Blackarachnia in Beast Wars when she was a Predacon and seduce Silverbolt XD. It will be interesting that interaction. I feel sad for Optimus/Orion because he still can't remember about his past when he was a Prime TT. I hope this amnesia don't get too long in the show TT.

Anyways, I love your story! You made a excellent work in this story! A big bear hug for you and a 100000000000000 infinite and beyond! X3

I love it.

:)