Reviews for The Origins of Naruto
vwheel10 chapter 13 . 11/13/2019
Okay you’ve done it I swear why do you have to be such a good writer stupid heart stupid tears goodbye I’m leaving I need a break I need ice cream I swear I will die if I keep reading stupid friggin feelings ruining my life
vwheel10 chapter 12 . 11/13/2019
This is heart wrenching I just uggggggg I will cry, my eyes are friggin burning
vwheel10 chapter 5 . 11/13/2019
You know, online communities like this and writers like you are what make people’s day, mine included. I’m honesty terrible with words so someone with much the same views me writing messages like this makes me incredibly happy!
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 14 . 12/21/2018
Holy moly I cried...I saw it coming the whole time, but the tears still came. Great job! I can't wait to read the sequel :)
Musingmouse chapter 6 . 1/24/2018
Hello! I'm a...bit late to this awesome 'party' but I saw that you wanted to see where some of your readers are from solo here I am! I hail from Utah...
Kate Cambarshky chapter 14 . 12/2/2017
So saaaaad... but I liked the plot... I'll be working on the sequel now. - Kate
Guest chapter 11 . 1/26/2017
I've yet to see a cannon explanation for Minato's death that makes sense. Why couldn't Kushina do the sealing? Why didn't they have fallbacks other than the shiki-fuin?

The only possible reasons I can think of is Hubris and/or Selfishness on Minato's part.

He was either too proud to think he would fail or he literally didn't give a damn about what would happen to Naruto without one of his parents to vouch for him and say "Yeah. Not the Kyuubi in human form. I would know, given he's my son". He'd rather die than man the fuck up and take care of his own child.

This could have all been prevented if Minato was a responsible adult. How fucking hard would it have been to have Jiraiya, the Sandaime, Kakashi, and the clan heads guard the cave entrance?
I bet they would have been able to stop Obito long enough for Minato to finish him off.

With the added benefit of the whole village knowing that a bigger threat than the Kyuubi was lurking around if they somehow failed. Because that seems important.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/26/2017
It's been rumored that the original clan heirs were almost all killed by the Kyuubi's attack. That's why Naruto was in a class full of clan heirs, save for Kiba and Sasuke. It makes sense- explaining why Itachi and Hana (Kiba's sister) are the eldest clan heirs.

It would also explain why people who know Naruto's heritage don't help him much in cannon. It hurts less to ignore a reminder of the loss of one of their children.
Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
I have just read your comment and i agree sincerely with everything you said... And thank you for sharing your mind and feelings with us :)
Yumi
Dhea30 chapter 13 . 5/21/2016
This ending is simply beautiful. But cruel and sad as well... TTATT I'm looking forward for the next chapter in "Things We Know" and what would happen at Team 4 reunion...
EBecker chapter 13 . 5/20/2016
oh poor Itachi! You haven't introduced him in the sequel yet so I've been wondering how he took all of this. I like Naruto being a genius, it makes for a very interesting story.
mickeymouse3265 chapter 11 . 4/23/2016
ok so wow I have seen almost the entire Naruto I'm in the war and Naruto is already dead with sakara trying to resurrect him ...sorry if you haunt seen that but you mentioned the ending and...but I have no clue what you are talking about with bolt and sia and anko's child and who is bolt
ChaoticHarmony1991 chapter 14 . 3/9/2016
Thanks for punching a hole through my heart. I appreciate it.
Shinigami Merchant chapter 13 . 3/7/2016
I read the chapter's you had posted for the sequel first, so now I'm just wondering if Naruto was assigned a mission because at the end there it seemed as though Naruto remembered and was watching Itachi. It just makes me so curious and I can't wait to see more, there is so much potential for the sequel.
Good Luck and please keep up the good work
sinisterdevil chapter 14 . 2/27/2016
yes! a sequel! I love you! the part where naruto forgets everyone was so sad. I almost felt like crying. team 4 had such a strong bond and after waiting so long for naruto to wake up, he forgets! Damn that must have hurt itachi really bad. thanks for a really good fic. I really appreciate this.
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