Oh man this is a great history, that a waste of a good job of a awesome autor, but is other lost in this life.

I think in ur fantacy u just give description too much emotionaly or in why ur story just something idea of it is totaly great

It's been a while since you updated (about 3 and a half years)...are you still writing? I hope you are... This is really quite excellent. Please do continue the story.

Awesome story update please.

Great story so far please update soon please.

I like the story so far. hoping you'd continue with it when you got time that is.

I still can't believe you write so much, it would take me months to write a chapter as long as yours. Anyways good chapter and I can't wait for the main plot to start.

i admire your writing skills. it wouldn't surprise me if people thought you were a 16-year old while they would probably think i'm 12 due to my writing. please keep on going with this, and b*tch please, get on with the story! ;D

alright, to be honest, i don't give a crap about mistakes anymore.. if anyone spots some in my story, fine, i'll fix them, but i won't check your story for an extra space tapped or so.. or maybe..?

anyways, patiently waiting for the next chapter

well written as always. really looking forward to when Red meets his old friends. One more 'stalling' chapter and we get right into the main plot, can't wait!

No lie. Pikachu sounds high. He's in dreamland trying to explain a scene even the author can't explain lol or maybe just in love. Oh well. Guess I gotta wait. Great description as always. Your chapters are super long. I say you cut them in half and just reply twice as fast lol

Taunting us with a brilliantly written preview. If the preview was this good the chapter has a lot to live up to. Update soon

Hmm not much I can really say about this chapter and the dream sequence. As always great description and writing, not as long as some of the other chapters but I'll give you a pass since it's just a preview.

Pretty long chapters, some were a little too long but whatever. Anyways good chapter and great new profile pic though it lacks advanceshipping.

so.. it was two in the night, and i was reading this thinking- yeah.. reading some GOOD shit before sleep, like a boss!

.. and then it stopped. it just STOPPED. WTF.

then it hit me. preview. OMG

anyways, great descriptions, writing style, flow.. and humor, as always! ;D

curse it.. opera mini doesn't support italics, atleast not for my phone.. -.-

update soon, if you please!

Browsed a couple of chapters. The biggest thing I think that you should take a second look at is your wall-of-text paragraphs. I like how your chapters are all very long, but you should structure the content so that it's readable. Another thing I noticed is that your use of tenses isn't consistent and it breaks the reader's immersion. I suggest that you find a beta.

i don't have much to say except for me being so happy that you got back your 'professional and awesome writing style plus flow' since some parts of your last chapter seemed.. stiff, lol.

anyways.. about May and Drew having da u know what; i have to.. 'protest' on that one..

seeing how this story MAY end up with Ash and May together, them having sex seems.. a little bit too far.. i mean, just like a few other said, it's.. bleh, i don't know how to really describe it.. but, for example, if Drew and May only made out a 'few' times it would've been understandable, but if they went that far and had sex it just seems..

well, considering their ages, Drew's personality and the all of those years without Ash, we can understand,

and, since I'm pretty much a multishipper, it's pretty much impossible for me to give you a non-advanceshipper's thought about this.. xD

anyways, UPDATE SOON Mr. WRITE5000WORDS PERDAY!