I really like this story and I hope you get a chance to come back and complete it.

The idea is completely out of nowhere, WTF to the extreme, there's mistake there and there... but damn it, if it isn't at least good and original.

It's weird, so weird, but I don't dislike it at all.

"Kotohona" and not "Makoto"
"This ideal appealed Lelouch" should instead be "This ideal appalled"
"Caster and Medea wondered what had happened" The problem is that this SHOULD be one person, not two, since Medea IS this War's Caster.

Very interesting!

I had my doubts when I saw the premise for this, really.

But, boy was I glad I gave it this fic a shot. It is PHENOMINAL!

Really disappointed you dropped it like a loose stool, though.

I think I'll pester you on your fics you are currently updating about it seeing as you'll likely never see this review.

Primate Murder?

I find it very very very very very hard to believe that Zouken would be sleeping when Shinji attempts to rape Sakura. He's the kind of evil that would forsake the grail just to see his son suffer. There is no inkling of a doubt that he would be savouring Sakura's defilement from a cornor somewhere, despite Sakura already being defiled from day one. Anyhoo, Zouken died too easy. And I don't think he even needs sleep.

Pretty good story so far!

Huh, I don't think Sion Elnam should be added to Lelouch's harem, but she'd make a good Alliay.
He needs Ether and she can produce a limitless quantaty of Ether-lite treads.
She needs help with her growing vampiric natre and He's got a cure.
An allience is a good idea & she IS a logical girl.

Medea might make a good addition to his Harem though...

Is Lelouch going to offer C.C pizza in exchange for the Geass power?
Is Akhia going to be sent home soon? Will Arcuied be perswaded to not get in the way? Does Zelretch know the current situation?
And last, but not least, Another two repeat errors through out this story are "short" and "obvious" when what you clearly meant to say was "shot" and "oblivious"; not to mention all those times you got "his", "her", "he", "him", and "she" mixed up.
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Good luck with your writting! Don't forget before posting.
Hope to read more chapters soon.

Aewsome Chapter!
Fantastic!
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That aside, there's ome things that need editing & correcting in this story.
I've already mentioned the issues of puntuation, spelling sentence strcture and information accuracy.
To that end, I just want to add that contract Seals appear on the back of the hand, not on the arm.
Also it is "Illya" and not "Ilya".

... Ok, this COULD be a great chapter.

There's LOTS of errors though.
I don't just mean the problems with diction, punctuation, word choice, and sentence structure that are prevailent through out this story either.
The biggest problem here is content.
1.
There HAVEN't been any Grail War related attacks on regular people yet because (A.) The War has only just started and (B.) Caster and Rider have gotten the power they need from their Masters.
2.
A wish was not made at the end of the 4th War. The Fire was a result of that War's ending.
3.
Gandolf and his Party are NOT participants of the Grail War, so -despite them having helped- The other participants are obligated to kill them or at least try to.
4.
In the anime KARA NO KYOUKAI (THE GARDEN OF SINNERS), that girl should be in a lot of pain (if not already dead) right now due to the need for an ergent surgery.

"compromised" not "comprised"
"option" not "opinion"
Among other issues.

Good chapter. Nearly amazing in fact!

Just need to fix those sentence phrazing problems first.

Oh! theres STAY NIGHT's Sakura! I'm glad she was saved!

A nice dramatic beginning!

You might want to edit out the errors.

Hmm...
Seems more like a CODE GEASS story crossed with LOTR rather than F/SN.

Please add Illya and C.C into the harem.