Reviews for Caught in the Whirlpool
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
Dear Quill of Molliemon,
I simply loved your series on this pokemon/naruto crossover, and it's simply AMAZING. I really wish that you would continue this series, but I am saddened because I realize that you likely abandoned it for a reason as you are not the type to stop whatever you are doing. I would love it if you would even consider picking this up again, because if not for you, I never would have found this beautiful AU. I realize that you are probably very busy these days, and that you are unlikely to pick it up again, but I would love it if you did. Either way, it is your choice, but I AM your fan, so I would be overjoyed if you picked it up again.
Thank you. i hope you find the time to read this little review I left you, but seeing as you don't realy spend a lot of time on Deviantart and even less time on , I won't get my hopes up.
Thanks again,
A fan of yours
wolfstar.e99 chapter 20 . 3/18
This one was really fun to read too! I love this AU so much
Sonata of Hades chapter 20 . 1/7
Having played through Pokémon Sword I couldn't help but think back to this amazing work. Having spent the time to go through it all again I'm still in love with your characterization and setting. Nothing feels out of place and it's such a refreshing take on a crossover, particularly with a series of works that continue to build off the last.

I hope that one day you will return to finish this story, and even the entire series. As of now, I'd just ask that you would post Chapters 21 and 22 on this site. Having to bounce back and forth between here and Deviantart can get a little tiresome, but never the less is still worth it for this incredible story.

I pray that you are well and once more humbly request an update to this story. Even if it is just to catch up the last 2 chapters. Thank you for this read, it is always a pleasure to go back to this tale. Stay Classy.
ksuzu chapter 20 . 12/23/2017
Revisiting this and it's as amazing as ever. Thus, coming to this chapter's end leaves me happy for all that's transpired, and abjectly sad.

There were so many great sentences sprinkled throughout this that had me wondering what the twist would be. Will we ever find out the secret behind the ruins? The smuggling ring? Will Sakura finally stop calling Kushina, Mrs. Uzumaki?

This series is absolute delight, and, in my opinion, the best and most carefully fleshed out crossover I've ever read. Although I would love an update, I'm also happy that this is here, to be reread. :)
RustedThunder chapter 20 . 8/12/2017
I only started reading your Pokémon/Naruto stories and they quickly became some of my favourite fanfics. You just make it work and it is in turn, amazing. Please continue these stories if you feel like it because they are astoundingly good, that, and I would like to read an interaction between Demon and Kyuumaru. All the best.

Russell T. Hundour
KyuubinUzumaki chapter 20 . 2/7/2017
Wow. Just wow. I think ive read all of your Pokémon naruto crossover one-shots/series. I think you did a marvelous job. I was a little out off by so much of Kushinas POV, but it really does make sense since we are in her home country and town. It was immensely frustrating when everyone was coming together but missing each other by a few hours/minutes/a street. I do love how you build up the tension.

I will echo what a lot of these reviews have left and hope that this may come to some sort of resolution. If not - I completely understand. As this story was written so long ago and life has a way of catching up. If you do, however know that I will get that notification and run to see what you bring out.

Whatever you may be doing now, I hope you are enjoying it as much as I have enjoyed reading this series.
The Golden Snitch chapter 20 . 5/8/2016
Is there any chance this will be updated? I wasn't going to ask, but I noticed you updated one of the oneshots recently. These are really good!
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The Golden Snitch
Guest chapter 20 . 3/15/2016
You should update this tory and finish it too. You got popular because of this series and its kinda shitty to turn your back on these fans.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/26/2015
I read this story and the other Naruto/Pokemon crossovers about a year ago and found it again today. I'm quite sad that will likely not be updated. I would love to know how the family will react when they realize that Naruto's father is Minato. I think Aunt Asuka's reaction would be quite interesting. I really love this story and I'll continue to hope that it will someday be updated.
tricia13 chapter 20 . 12/1/2015
Is Naruto going to give his mum the ducklett he caught for her?
pain1516 chapter 20 . 11/27/2015
I've read this whole series before, but I had to come back and reread all of them because I love these stories so much. I hope one day you come back and update this~
eeveelutionlover2000 chapter 20 . 8/21/2015
I love your Naruto/Pokemon crossovers! I didn't think that I would find many crossovers I would love. Especially fics were the naruto cast is in the pokemon verse but with different continents. Yours was the first I liked! I've read Shiny Demon a few times before, but I never noticed that it had continuations. I am really glad that I had been able to read these fics. I really like your plots and the stories. Even the situation with Minato was done very well. Your characters actually seem like characters, and they're not OOC(outofcharacter). It would be a pleasure to be able to continue reading these fics. It was so sad about Shadow, there are very few fics where a noted character like him dies. And really!?, the Akatsuki gained a shiny Mewtwo?! That was awesome. I wonder if anyone would meet Lugia during there stay in Uzu? I really hope for your update!
person chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Please update... pretty please with a naked orochimaru on top!
panther73110 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Love this series and hope you finish it
asnlcdsbaj chapter 20 . 12/21/2014
I know it's been a long time, and you're probably not going to update, but this is a great story. It would be great to see the ending of this story. I love how well you incorporated pokemon into naruto, and the story line itself is so unique. So could you please update?
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