That was very sweet :-)

so cute!

:D I LOVED IT! It was so great! Perfect Tiva, and there was nothing wrong with the end:) sorry I never replied back to your PM. I just realized now. I had read it at a time when i didn't have time to reply to it so I said ohhh I'll do it later. I never did. So sorry.

I am also a very lousy reader. I still haven't read new Beginnings:(

Anyway, back to the story. It was AWESOME and I think you did it perfectly:) you know how your heart gives a little pang at that one Line that just... Breaks you? Makes you want to cry? All good hurt comfort stories have one. Anyways, in this story it was when you said she was repeating "I'm sorry" over and over again. The whole thing was great. And sorry if I made no sense because it is late and I am not lucid:) just kidding.

Love it:) thanks for the shout out! I will read NB when I can:)

Nice job! I liked it a lot