Reviews for The Challenge
Aishiteru Bondomu chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
OMFG, I love it so much! I am also an idiot though...I clicked on this fic and I thought it said, like, 10 chapters or something, and then I realised I was not wearing my reading glasses and that it was one really long chapter! I love this fic! It's near midnight for...oooh, so tired. *rubs eyes and tries to calm her fangirling about all the kisses*
darket15 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Okay, this one is hard to believe there isn't going to be more. How could this end with such a Challenge! It could be a very interesting story all in it's self.
PearlesantlRose chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I like this one too! And once again I am wishing there was more to it. Good stuff!
Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I love how you wrote their conversations XD I This story was funny :3
Eventideless chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Aw, don't hate yourself for writting this! It's really a nice read I'm when bored or just want a long one-shot! XDD Great job! (d).(b)
TideOfMelancholy chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
well, it is long, but their last conversation is so worth it.

so, well done, keep it up.

and yea, man, fuck college.
a1y-puff chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I like their banters towards the end. And I like how Kanda is all "DUN WANNA" at the idea of a relationship. Or even at the idea of caring for each other BUT HE DOES CARE THE DORK *cough*.

Anyway, enjoyed it a lot so Imma fave it :D
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
hahahaha. your author note is hilarious! although i understand what you mean. . Nonetheless, i just love it! especially that part when the train stop and Kanda sidestep out of the way and then Allen land on his face. hahahaha. hilarious moment!
olivia-yuymaxwell chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
this is really nico long one shot :) their arguments & kisses are random but cute as well. Hope they would make their relationship deeper. And plz make another yullen
not bitter just twisted chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Very good. Thought you captured kanda perfectly. Pity you won't continue it.
violindreamer chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Is this really a one shot? If I requested, would you continue? Please?
blackirishawk chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
haha yeah! That was good... You write some brillant stories
EXO718 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
LOL, everything turns into a pissing contest with these 2. You should write a part 2 if you get a chance.
waterlit chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
This was plenty good! It was interesting and the pacing was good and I just love the way you wrote Allen and Kanda here (:
13thReflection chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Wow, what an awesome story! :D

They are just so cute together!

Great job!