Hey man you need to continue this storyline it's brilliant although I do believe if u tried a big harder u for use the ancient language and don't end your chapters so sharp and add some more detail but on e again quit your day job we need moreeeee Fe free to contact me at

beautiful

thats the end? please add more

Congratulations on a great story! I loved it! Are you going to finish it, or it's just complete this way?
Thank you for this "ending".

Good job.

I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
I also believe you could have extended it by adding a flower garden, which of course arya drottning would love,
and also in the end now that they have to depart for the second time but both eragon and arya know the extent of their feelings for each other, how would their departure be? For eragon may not be coming back to alagesia in the forseeable future, while they may still be able to exchange letters and also arya may visit the dragon hold time and again. I would also like to think after a few years she would pass the throne to someone else and come to live with eragon. I know that eragon might also pass the lead to one of his student to go to elesmera but i think it unlikely or that simply it would take a much longer time.

The one thing i did not like about the story was arya having a hand maiden. Remember how elves think that king/queen live for the service of their people, not to rule over them. Plus it is highly unlikely for any elf to have hand maidens simply because of their strength and how they feel towards others and how every elf is treated with respect, It is more unlikely for arya to have a hand maiden. She is independent and not open with anybody except a few.

Buut i loved the story, I liked the way you have written it, although i would want to know now that she knows her deep love for eragon, would her true name have changed?

Sad that you ended the story, I would have loved to keep reading.. :)
you can mail me if you wish to talk.

You are good at this. When is the next chapter coming out?

A fantastic read far more enjoyable then the sick feeling inheritance left me with! I must of scoured 200 fan fics now and this wondrous piece of art is definitely amongst the best

Thank-you!

Louis.

Great story but please update it, i need more. And on top of that i am getting sick of these top notch story's being abandond. It is so stupid

Just so you know, in case you didn't, CP is going to write a book V in the inheritance cycle. Inheritance wasn't the end. And, although Inheritance was a rather disappointing temporary end for the romance, you have to admit that it opened up a lot of new avenues for Arya/Eragon romance fanfictions.

Okay, yeah, you should definitely finish this. Seriously. Please?! I LOVE IT!

Ahem...MOREMOREMOREMORE...MOARMOARMOARMOAR...GIVEMEHGIVEMEH...more please.

Again, an excellent chapter, loved reading it. Just one thing though: the conversation between Eragon and Arya seemed a bit...awkward. Not that, if I, with my nervousness and my dreadful social skills, was in their place, would have anything better to say, but still. That laugh from Eragon felt a bit forced and out of place, I mean, it wasn't something that funny or unexpected. Or that could be just me lacking a sense of humor...
Anyways, excellent story.

I can honestly say this chapter had me laughing for 5 minutes after reading it. The conversation between Frinen and Arya is just so...ridiculous, and yet, it is just how I imagined the personality of the green dragon. Even now, some time after reading it, it brings a smile to my face every time I remember it.

I really liked it, though I personally think arya should have given up the crown and come to find him. Ah well, just an opinion.